Ani's (aniri) Reviews

Ani

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#4014861

Review of That's you

Review by Ani

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I related so much with this. Your words have an ache to them which makes the poem very easy to connect to. Feels autobiographical but I may be wrong. The imagery is striking and abundant in loneliness, making your story very graphic and potent. My favorite line is : "Although without a hello can you have a goodbye."

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#4014848

Review of Two Faithful Lovers

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

I am not a romantic and hence never try to write on that particular subject but reading your poem makes me want to take a chance. Your words have a serene effect and a sort of prophetic tone which establishes from the very first line a hint that no matter how bad things are going to get for this couple, it's going to end perfectly for them. I like the faith you have and it feels sort of autobiographical. Few words, but they tell the story well.

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#3952819

Review of Where He Left Me

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

I was drawn to your poem because I'm a huge fan of Dicken's work, especially Great Expectations. It's always interesting to read different perspectives of the old story. Especially from the point of view of a character who really didn't get to say everything her background tale burdened her with. This was a fascinating read. Although the setting is familiar, I like your creative touch.

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#3952464

Review of If I Should Die Today

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

My heart broke. What sincere, beautiful lines! Tears...

5

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#3952402

Review of Spirit Cloud

Review by Ani

Rated: E

| (3.5)

This is a masterful impression of this situation that so moved you. Enjoyed the colors and drama in your words.

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#3952393

Review of Don't Fear

Review by Ani

Rated: E

| (3.5)

This is just what I needed at the moment. Something to give my guts that mammoth push. I don't know how one writes such motivational poetry, do you channel some sort of inner burst of confidence or do you have to BE this way to write. Fearless and unapologetic? Enjoyed.

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#3952388

Review of Questions about New Year's Parties

Review by Ani

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Fantastic piece!! I enjoyed it thoroughly! Especially the line "I wonder as I listen to the year's birth song."- the last stanza is a perfect ending and all your musings are so very true! Daring to do things differently.

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#3952386

Review of The Voice of Creation

Review by Ani

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Despite the words that war so engagingly, bringing out the idea in a lucid fashion, it's a poem that didn't get lost in its mammoth theme. Enjoyed every single line.