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Review by Minkymoo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I read it, I know it, I understand it. I liked the read.
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Review of Just Me?  Open in new Window.
Review by Minkymoo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very powerful very strong these are things I have battled with, my mixed emotions hitting me where I might hurt the most, but . In my head I stand up and shake off all those negative people and claim back the body that is MINE and tell my miserables to F@#K OFF.
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Review of Love  Open in new Window.
Review by Minkymoo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
"Far from led astray,they are but led together". Those words will plague me until my daughter reaches her adolescence I'm thankful

she is 4 years old right now and the day she tells me she has a boyfriend or...a girlfriend...those words are what I shall remember.

I'd like to think that I have felt true loves touch but at the same time I can not be truly sure, yes those 4 tiny letters in that one GIANT

word do hold much power. But, is not the power of Love from thy self, for thy self, why must it start with another or a significant

before you, can it not start with the love you hold for you?

So the question I pose is... Has anyone ever truly loved ones self in order to truly love another another? Or would that make us to

fussy to put ourselves first?
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Review of The Smile  Open in new Window.
Review by Minkymoo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This intrigues me, I would be interested to see how far you could take this story, it has a twist to it if you know what I mean.
The main Character seems to have unknowingly made his own story come to life through his subconscious or fantasy if you will. That fact that he has taken the female character out of his own manuscript and incorporated it into his personal life makes me wonder if there is more to this story.

So I guess the question is... Will you be adding more to this story? It was a good read.
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Review of A closer look.  Open in new Window.
Review by Minkymoo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
These words are true and it is unfortunate that the negative stares and whispers are there, very touching read.
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Review of Moments of You  Open in new Window.
Review by Minkymoo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
Wow, I almost feel for you having to go through all these wonderful moments and yet still winding up alone but are not the feelings you feel grand, it's like the forbidden fruit the apple is so very close that you can smell it but so far that you can not touch it or reach it.

I liked reading this I could feel the emotion and the raw confusion that you have or had.
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Review of The Grave Teacher  Open in new Window.
Review by Minkymoo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I absolutely loved reading this it sent sad happy shivers down my spine I'm glad I read it.
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Review by Minkymoo Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
This gave me the sense that you were feeling a bit overwhelmed or perhaps conflicted in dealing with the decisions you make for yourself. I don't believe you can fix the past to save your future while struggling to live in the present it would make "life" a lot more difficult and a lot less desirable. Not to sound abrupt but it's not a combination that you need, I think it's self discipline, if you truly want to live your life to it's maximum potential then fight yourself with positive self discipline.
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