Hi- I quite enjoyed reading this. Your words definitely successful in painting the picture of traffic on a hot summer day. Perhaps we have all been there in our way to our favorite beach. Loved it - keep writing 😊
Hi. I ABSOLUTELY loved this. This is a fantastic, keep you wanting to read story. I easily could envision your daughter in my mind’s eye. The ending is fantastic. It reminds me of something that could easily have happened to me. Thinking wow I handled that well, just to turn around and see the real reason it went so well 😊
Keep writing!!!!
Very well written. Some people long to reach unreachable perfection. You bring light to the idea that it may not be all is cracked up to be. Keep writing 💕
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