Wow! this is a wonderful, creative story and i enjoyed reading it so much. the beginning was kind of strange of I suggest making it more detailed and everything. over all, i spent a lot of time looking at this and it is great! keep up the good work. i hope you can add more chapters! :))
Wow, guys! This is the most amazing and creative I have ever seen. You have so many group members and all that! And the stories are also pretty neat, I like them all. Perhaps you shouldn't name ALL the group members, because most people don't prefer having to look through them all. Anyhow, it's great and I really like it!
Perfect writing! Simply stupendously written. I enjoyed this so much, I just enjoyed the ending of this writing so much I kept on re-reading it over and over again. But I don''t get how you still look like a ten-year-old? Not much sense, but I still like it.
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