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Review of Don't Go  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this. Even though it was short, it was in enough depth to evoke the sadness that was obviously behind its writing. Not sure if you really want to, since this seems a very personal work, but for a simple, objective opinion, I'd like to say that the very last line seems so... jarring, compared to the rest of the piece. Probably because divorce is such a harsh, ugly word, and the rest is full of soft, loving prose. Like walking through a thick, misty fog... straight into a lamppost.

That's just my opinion, but the piece is really good, either way :)

Thanks for sharing!
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