This is written well. I find it a very true piece of writing. You've written everything that I have had trouble putting into words. This to me is, as well as a lot of other things, is everybody's life written simply and you've done very well to show it. It shows readers a lot. Like how people should treat their parents better then some do. How to treat others better than they do. Very well done.
I loved this story. It seems to have a very interesting storyline. I just wanted to keep on reading. Suspense is created well. At one point I was holding my breath. I would love to read more. :)
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