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Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice. I like the intrigue you provoke with this piece. I was scared for the Main Character.
Only thing I guess that stuck out to me is, pretty much all the special abilities of a vampire that you've displayed have already been used. Maybe event some new abilities or habits or identifiable traits of their appearance, to make them different from all the other vampires in stories out there.
But, just ,my opinion. Great piece though.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, this was so helpful. :)
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