Its a good story, great discriptions of the people and where they are. It is though a very commomn story, at least were I live. In my town this story is real but noone really knows what happened that nite. I liked it because it put things in perspective for me even though that wasnt really your plan. The only problem I found with the story is that it dosent really have an ending. Thats all you need and it would be an excellent story.
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