Wow. You write a very power and compelling story. I love the multiple dichotomies you create in your story, whether intentional or not. You give your character distinct and believable personalities with minimal words and effort. The interaction between Polly and Greg is cute and reminds me of dates with my current girlfriend.
The only thing you should consider adding is more explanation for Polly's condition.
Marvelous work.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/amazingconnor
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.10 seconds at 10:53pm on Nov 23, 2024 via server WEBX2.