This story is pretty good. each chapter is the perfect length to not be boring. Each path has something for everyone, too, which makes it more enjoyable. However, it does lack some content. most paths lead to dead ends that weren't supposed to be dead ends. As a personal request, I would also like to see an option where you (the player character) is a human rooming with an anthro
Hello, fellow writer! Let's start with the positives, and boy, are there a lot of them! This story is obviously made for the scat fetish, and it does a good job of covering it's bases. One of the best things is that this story's portrayal of scat is remarkably accurate.
Sadly, no story is perfect. Fortunately, I see only one problem: Personally, I would like to see a path that makes the animals smell YOU, the reader. That's just an opinion from me.
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