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28 Public Reviews Given
28 Total Reviews Given
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Review of Survival  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This was very heart felt. It was simple, also
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Review of Celebrating Irma  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Was not interested in it. Sorry I'm in Texas and I have family in Florida.
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Review of The wind???  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi I'm girly girl. Great poem.
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Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
True story, I think? Was neat to read enjoyed it dearly.
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Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Great daydreaming!!! But vines had a w and it kinda ran together as if it was a long sentence.
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Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
The man on the moon, would that be the moon, in general. Because your reaching for the stars, but the brightest star is trying to tell you something else.
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Review of you effect me  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.0)
Newby, don't be discouraged, I think that was not very interesting. Affect isn't the word you were wanting to use. Effect is the word you should have used. At first I thought it was a serial killer you were pinpointing out. Until the last sentence when you wanted to find the spark again. Maybe you should have said to make me live again. It sounds more uplifting. With the butterflies and all.
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Review of If you can  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I get it, not to be blinded by others. To understand ones feelings, and to not be dishonest about loving whether there is a chance that you will be loved back. If you can?
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Review of Lights In The Sky  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Not really what I was interested in reading, the title hasn't any. Well Solar System. You were stating what you had read. Not very smart. If about the solar system, you would need to be up to date or more mythical. In my perspective.
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Review of Journey  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great!!! It explains a life time in 7 lines.
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Review of She Is....  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
During the review, I couldn't help but realize that she was just a girl. Trying to summarize a female like the seasons isn't quite real unless you can give her the heart beats of the seasons. Like she is better than the cold bitter wind that leaves frostbite on your cheeks as the flowers bloom red yellow orange, to open a window and watch the wind and rain persuade the sun to finally peak out of the clouds that will never vanish due to the on coming fall.
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Review of September  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Short, sweet, and sad. Can't beat the three S's,!
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Review of Death  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Well curious, not to be mean but it comes in all forms. If you see death as a searcher, then be careful. Death is a gambler, and will bet that even when it's time to go, you won't be ready!
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Review of Pictures  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh so great- never saw any of that coming. Just tickles me. That silly boss.
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Review of Reversion  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Special! Very pleased with the whole thing.
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Review of The Waiting Room  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sad can't decide if Gabriel was killed. Or taken. Or at church. But very pleased!
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Review of Starlights  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sweet, straight to the point, and she would love it!
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Review of The Hole  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
I could relate. When relating with my real life. Well has to be good. I like it.
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Review of Enjoy Life  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I think you kinda lost track towards the end. A little weird is but started of great
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Review of Solitude  Open in new Window.
Review by Girly Girl Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Genuinely long. But didn't lose me in it. Very sincere.
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