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Review of WDC Birthday Quiz  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
It was an interesting quiz
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I found your story to be funny and I really did like it. I also liked the part when she tried to put on the sweater, found

that it was too small, and decided to let it become her dogs new sweater. A few questions: 1# How did her sister do

laundry on stormy days if she didn't have a dryer? 2# Did this actually happen to you? 3# Why oh why did the lady

need to where that sweater I mean if it were me I would have just worn either a jacket or a sweatshirt. Other than those

questions I found the interesting, funny comedy I was looking to read.
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Review of Disney Mix up  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
It was a little short but it made me think for minuet
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I took this quiz and I found that it was a little to easy because the answer was in the question.
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Review of Bella  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This story was really sweet I thought you really portrayed how the puppy felt in that time of first seeing snow.

I wondered why they choose to get another dog and what kind was it? Because all I had to go on was it was a fluffy, black puppy.

What did you mean by Bella could spell? Are you saying she's really smart? I think you did a good job following the prompt.

Im not sure if I liked the way you ended your story. The whole story led up to the new puppy and then you wrote "the truck smells like wet dog. Im okay with that."

this is just me but I just didn't like that part. Thank you for the story I found it was heartwarming.
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