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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like your prolog as well, you might want to add some discriptions about the area or time period. I like how it's from the main character's view and that it's left a mystery as to who she is. I too have other stories that I switch to when I hit a writer's block. Sometimes I watch history or other type of programs that are similar to help stir up ideas. Have you looked into a publisher? I'm leaning to Aventine Press but haven't decided yet. Good luck. Chris
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Review by alleywolf Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great start to a novel, I usually don't go for the scifi type but I like the concept of your character. It reminds me of a character in a book called "Neverwhere". In that book the character(s) were beautiful women who could take your life heat from you. You might want to look into the book, it may help stir up more ideas on you character. I'll take a look at your other chapters later. How far are you with your manuscript?
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