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Review of An Acrostic Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a really good effort. I like it all.

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY WDC" indeed. :)

There is one thing though. In line 14, "That is all they caters". I think it might be ungrammatical, using both "they" and "caters".

On the whole, awesome. Write on!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Superbly simple and simply superb. Haikus suit your style. Keep writing. Thanks.
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Review of Dress  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is by far one of the best descriptive story i have read. It really pulls one into the events and one actually fels the fantastic adventure that is the designing of a fabric. On the whole, it was a good activity. I would love to read more from you.
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