God What Can I say...? This is truly a Horror Suspense Master piece... it from the beginning I started imagining every simple thing... how did the school look, the characters, etc. and then the scene transition was seamlessly... and I could feel the hopelessness of the narrator... the story is great over all... and the ending is actually terrifying... the kids never were found... the place destroyed... the only remainder of it was the wuss of the narrator....
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