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Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I really like this poem. it was kind of confusing to start off with. But, very deep. It makes you think hard about it, to understand.
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Review of What Truth?  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem was really good. I like the details and imagery.
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Review of Bus Stop  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is really good. It made me want to read more. It could use a little more details, and description. I really enjoyed it. I like how you didn't fine out he was a vampire, until the very end.
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Review of A Broken Wish.  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is really good. It has excellent imagery and really good details. I really enjoyed reading this story.
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Review of My Lullaby To You  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like the imagery in this poem. Very well written.
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Review of Closed  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem was a little confusing. Some of the lines didn't make sense and it took me a minute to understand it. But, it is very well written. I like the imagery and the good details. I really like the strong use of vocabulary. I really enjoyed this poem.
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Review of Silent Tears  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awh, this is really sweet and really sad. I love the imagery and the good details. I really like this poem.
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Review of That L Word  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is very well written. I really enjoyed read this. Some of the line were a littel confusing, but over all it was really good. Good details were used. Also, it believeable, you can actually see something like this happening. I really like this poem.
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Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is really good. I really like the second chapter just about as much as I like the first chatper. Its really detailed and grabs you attention. It really makes me want to read more into it. I can't wait for the 3rd chapter to coome out. Im really into it now.
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Review of defeat  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked this peom, because it has a lot of meaning. It's really deep and makes you think.
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Review of Shadows  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like this peom. It was well written. I like the repition of "eyes unseeing, unwilling"
I really enjoyed this peom.
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Review of The List  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
i really like this peom. it was well written. short, simple and to the point. i reallly like it.
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Review of A Lover's Lament  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
This peom was really sweet. It made me think about a time that I expierenced a time like this. It was very well written.
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Review of A tragic accident  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is really sad. It really makes you think about something like this happening to someone that you really care about and love. It needs a little more details. What kind of accident. Where was the accident. It needs more descrition. But, over all. I really enjoyed it.
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Review of Strangers Again  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really love this poem. It really speaks to me and makes me think. I can really relate to this poem because I have been in the situation before. I really hurts to end something. to just walk away. It really makes your mind wonder. I really love this poem.
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Review of Cold as Ice  Open in new Window.
Review by Amy Daniel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem is really well written. But the rhyme scheme doesn't flow well, and you used the word "I" too much. But over all, I really like this poem.
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