I want to preface my review with I just began writing myself. My overall impression is it's a good story. I found interesting the juxtaposition of time and what felt like the old 1050's feel of the setting. Reminded me of a black and white sci-fi film.
I would have liked to hear more about the lack of patents and copyrighted material affected the inventor, his sister and brought them to this current situation.
Overall, how you dealt with issues involving time travel was very creative.
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