Oh my gosh, please write more! I can't get enough of your writing and this story is fantastic! I love it. Left me with goosebumps and butterflies! I don't really have any criticism for you, I know I already gushed about the first part of the story and this part was even better! Keep writing!
I love this! It is very well written and I love how you work descriptions in with the action, I struggle to do the same. It flows very nicely. It hits home with me. It sounds personal and emotion-filled. I loved every moment of reading it and I look forward to reading much much more!
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