Extremely well written. Creates suspense and hope with every line, and ends with a charming grace. I did not understand it completely until the end, and then it all came together. A very complex poem. Thank you for this work of genius. Please continue writing.
Very interesting story. Just enough characters with an equal balance of suspense and comedy. I do wish that it was a bit longer though, it leaves me wondering about Fred's relationship with Beth, as well as his credit situation. Overall very good. Keep writing!
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