You really take soomeone back to those times. this is very well wriiten and done so well that you do take the reader to the place they need to be to enjoy this. Absolutley intelligently written. A pro.
Very cool and very sparadoc or sparadic, I don't I'll look up the spelliing later. But, end result, yeah BIPOLAR and I certainly enjoyed the read and UNDERSTOOD perfectly.
I've always thought was the coolest form of poetry. And you do it so well. I haven't written one since grade school. Really nice and light. Thanks for sharing this.
Are you selling this stuff? You really ought to. I would like to know you sometime in the real world. This was just so GD well written. You're character's actions, thoughts and experiences portray so realistically and believable. You are a rare find, indeed. Thanks for this.
Wow, for yur first acrostic, you picked a hard and one pulled it off beautifully! I did 5, one that I wont mention, but the otehr for were PEACE LOVE WAR & HATE and decided if I did anymore than those, it would lesson the impact of them. So that'sd it for me for acrostic poetry. I loved this!
Well, this certainly explains "truth" with a bid more of an engraining detail. I'm sorry for your loss. It is very sad, especially when you are ready for it to from one thing and it turns out to be the one thing they were in complete control of. I have suffered some major losses along the way, let me tell you, you may never forget, but eventually, it does not haunt your daily routine. Good job in writing this and I hope it serves the purpose of helping other parents in making the decision to quit for the sake of their children.
needs development. Sounds like crystal meth to me, not an easy road to divert from! Really good, although, I do think it needs some further development, which is why, of course, we all are on this site. I hope you're not slamming the stuff if it is about CM
Cheers!
AJ
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