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Dear 💙 Carly - March into spring Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Yikes! I feel for Posy. To have your hopes and dreams crushed like that. I want to do violence to Brock and Samantha on Posy's behalf.

My Favorite Part(s)

In under 300 words, you managed to tell an entire tale, of happiness to betrayal. Well done. "You can both go to hell" sums it up nicely.

Suggestions/Questions:

Was this for a contest? I hope it's not based on a true story *Hug1**Frown**Hug2* . I plan on checking in on your writings in the future. Thanks for sharing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Gaby Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

You seem like a fun-loving free spirit.

My Favorite Part(s)

Your tongue-in-cheek answers to the questions about you. I love your spirit.

Final thoughts:

Keep on writing, and being you. I am glad I checked out some of your port, and look forward to reading more in the future. Glad you are here.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Counting Time  Open in new Window.
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Dear Fyn Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Time just seems to fly everywhere...like trying to catch beads or grains of sand in your hand...the harder you try to catch them, the more of them slip through your hand.

My Favorite Part(s)

I like the last lines - "until my thread is cut my tapestry grows warmer and more complex...and love as if I've all the tomorrows in the world.

Final Thoughts:

I've read it a couple of times now, and it does strike a chord in me. Live, love, give, as we know not when the thread will be "cut". Thank you for sharing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Carolina's Curls  Open in new Window.
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Dear maggie Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

What a wonderful little story about turning "lemons into lemonade". I applaud the teacher who made this a learning and fun event for all of the children.

My Favorite Part(s)

Carolina's attitude. Losing hair can be devastating, and it reminded me of my own daughter who lost her hair to cancer at age 7. I let her cut my hair off, and we rocked matching bandanas for a year.

Suggestions/Questions:

I see that this was written quite a while ago. What was your inspiration?

Happy WdC Anniversary.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Musings...  Open in new Window.
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Dear Gaby Author IconMail Icon ,

Back again. I was drawn to this in your port "Musings"

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I was curious about the title The Wedding Vows, and wanted to see what it was about. It wasn't what I thought it was going to be - This seems more like a jilting at the altar, and it was a painful read. I could feel the heartbreak and the pain in the once happy bride to be. I couldn't imagine such heartache. Truly, divorce is easier to tolerate than this.


Suggestions/Questions:

Is this just an imagining of yours? I hope it isn't based on a true story. Thank you for sharing, even if it wasn't the happiest of writings. Gives someone something to ponder.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Dear Davy Kraken Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

This looks like a really cool game. I think I may have seen it once or twice, and now I wish I had participated.

My Favorite Part(s)

The different saying that you could come up with, just by changing the blank letters.

Suggestions/Questions:
What made you think of this game? Will you run it again in the future? I hope so. If you do, I will be sure to participate.

Thanks for sharing what looks like a great game.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear JCosmos Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again, and Happy WdC Anniversary this month.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Holy Mackerel! What a BIG to do list! That is mind boggling to me that you have such goals. An inspiration, indeed!

My Favorite Part(s)

Of course, my sappy side loved your last item on your list - loving the wife every day. What could be better?

Suggestions/Questions:

This was your 2024 list - did you get a lot of it done? Thanks for sharing!


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear Sophy is 23! Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your review of this book, My impressions are these:

I would like to read more about this book. It seems a little confusing to me, as my background is evangelical Christianity. I know Jesus used everyday people/places/events to instill a Biblical truth, but it may just be that this book is a little over my head *FacePalm*

My Favorite Part(s)

I liked your in-depth review of Spiritual Literacy. It covered just about anything you would want to know. I could feel your enthusiasm for it in your writing.

Suggestions/Questions:

I wonder if it is still available on Amazon. I guess I will have to go check it out. Happy WdC Anniversary!


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear ~LadyBee~ Author IconMail Icon ,

After looking at your c-notes, My impressions are these:

I haven't seen these before, and you have quite the variety.

My Favorite c-note(s) The Happy Birthday in the pinks, and the Happy Valentine's Day in the blue.

Suggestions/Questions: You should advertise these notes, or if you like, I could plug them in the newsfeed. Thanks for sharing these notes. I hope to peruse your port in the future.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Thoughts on Aging  Open in new Window.
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Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon Author Icon

My First Impression:

I have to say, getting older sometimes just sucks. But my Dad always told me that getting older beats the alternative.

My Favorite Part:

I like the "sassiness" of the poem. Why should I age with grace and poise?. A great question. Who said that it was a requirement? "do not go gentle into night". Well said.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

I'm glad that I checked out your poem. Thank you for sharing it.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Hello Chris Breva Author Icon

My First Impression:

This is a very good story to share. It also gives one pause and is thought provoking. How often do we "forget" to thank God, for even the mundane, let alone life changing events?

My Favorite Part:

You gave this story a freshness with your writing, and also your gentle nudging, rather than overwhelming someone with "a baseball bat". I appreciate that, and I'm sure others do as well.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

I looked up this writing at the urging of a Newsfeed posting, and I'm glad that I did so. Keep up the good work! Blessings to you and yours.

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear Gratefully IE Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

In your word search, you've captivated a marvelous time at the beach. Sand castles, surfing, sunglasses. The only thing missing was the sunscreen or suntan lotion, depending on your skin tone *Laugh*

My Favorite Part(s)

Word Searches are my favorite type of puzzle, and this did not disappoint at all.

Final Thoughts:

I hope you have a wonderful WdC anniversary month, and I hope to browse through more of your work in the future. Thanks again for sharing this bit of fun.



*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello 🐺Wolfkingdom🏰 Author Icon

My First Impression:

This might be the tinniest word search I've ever seen. Very clever using 2-letter words. Some of them I knew, and some of them I would have thought were just made up.

My Favorite Part:

Finding them took a little longer than I imagined. The 2-letter concept was fun to solve.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Well done! I'm glad you shared this "mini" version of a word search. Thank you.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Hello Ned Author Icon

My First Impression:

A bouncy fun poem.

My Favorite Part:

Your play on the poem Hickory Dickory Dock. With following the prompt of "losing something".

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

If I know cats, he won't be lost for long, and bringing a prize for his efforts...a headless mousie. A fun chuckle, and thanks for sharing. I hope PromptMaster got a kick out of this poem.

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Dear Chris Breva Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

This definitely does the title "Area 51" proud. As a fan of word searches, I was also drawn to this subject, as I haven't seen another puzzle like this.

My Favorite Part(s)

The puzzle runs the gamut of topics related to area 51, both real life, and immaginings.

Suggestions/Questions:

I hope your endeavors in studying have proved profitable and satisfying. Thank you for sharing this fun puzzle.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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*Flowerw* This is a wonderful story that I found in the Read and Review Port.

*FlowerB* This story caught me from the start, with the photos. I loved

Joe's simplicity, and I think this is part of what caught Vi's attention to begin with.

The story of using the different car as an added perk was cool.

*FlowerY* I enjoyed this story, as it was not abrupt in changing scenes. It flowed nicely and covered a lifetime of interaction between Joe and Vi.

*FlowerP* While I was sad at Joe's passing, it was part of the story. I understood what Vi meant about not wanting to be without Joe.

*FlowerV* When it was Vi's turn to pass, I embraced it, and I loved the ending. "How is my Angel? Oh, and I think you're gonna love the new car."

I'm glad I took the time to read this. Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely,
AmyJo
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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear 💙 Carly - March into spring Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Wow!! This was an eye opener. And possibly something that I need to do for myself. You set yourself some goals that are wonderful, and yet not overwhelming.

My Favorite Part(s)

Your honesty about what you have accomplished for the day, or what you will have accomplished. I for one, like how you used gardening to help with your being active. A little dirt therapy is always a good thing.

Suggestions/Questions:

Is this the only time that you have done this? I feel like this would be a good way to stay motivated without going over the top. Thanks for sharing, and I hope this year's anniversary is your best one yet.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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for entry "I Don’t Understand " Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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My First Impression:

Trust me, you are not the only one who doesn't understand. My dad's word for this man is "buffoon". I cannot help but agree with him. *FacePalm* . He is a business man, not a politician, and he doesn't try to hide this fact. I'm not sure that he is a good business man, given how many times he has gone bankrupt. Still, he is somehow relevant?

My Favorite Part:

You followed the prompt, and have given us something to think about.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

It is time for politicians to rethink what they are in Washington for. That this man has been elected is beyond astounding; but I fear the apathy of the people who are tired of the "same old, same old" will have some dire consequences that we cannot even contemplate at this time.

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Hello iKïyå§ama Author Icon

My First Impression:

Talk about a "hook"! Your story drew me in. While reading, I tried to think if this was a true story.

My Favorite Part:

The ideals of both men, while different, were at the same time wanting to achieve the same goal. The "man of peace" did indeed come to a violent end. I'm not sure about the "man of violence", though. I don't think he died violently, but I'm not as sure of my civil rights history.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

You followed the prompt perfectly, and this indeed would have been monumental. Two men, different ideals, wanting peace for their people. Thank you for sharing.

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Dear Jill Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I'm a big fan of recipes and especially cookies.

My Favorite Part(s)

It looks like a yummy recipe. I plan on making these cookies this weekend.

Suggestions/Questions:

How long have you used this recipe. What flavoring(s) are your favorite? Happy WdC Anniversary! Thanks for sharing this recipe.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello JCosmos Author Icon

My First Impression:

Woah! Talk about a "hook"!

My Favorite Part:

Looks like you followed a prompt, and it went somewhere I didn't expect. Your depiction of the 3 flags, and the new name of "Christian States of North America".

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

This writing makes me want to read on, and to have some questions answered. When did this happen? Is it a metaphor along the lines of 1984? Inquiring minds want to know!

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Dear Eric the Fred Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Short, sweet, and to the point. The nerd in me laughed at your poem. It's been a while since I've seen a "404" message, and I remember bugging my dad or my son to bail me out when it happened. Of course it's been a while, (I remember AOL, for heaven's sake *BigSmile*)

My Favorite Part(s)

This poem just tickled my funny bone today, and gave me a much needed chuckle.

Suggestions/Questions:

I see that it was written back in 2009, hence the reference, I guess. Thank you for sharing this little bit of comic relief. Today, it is. Back then? A bit of a pain in the rear.

*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello StephBee Author Icon

My First Impression:
This puzzle gives me high school English vibes. Some of the names I remember, some are a little less so.

My Favorite Part:

Kate the Shrew, of course. LOL.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

I see that you have othello mentioned twice. Is that on purpose? Thank you for sharing this wonderful reminder of a long ago favorite poet/playwright.

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Dear amy-Finally writing a novel. Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

You describe "Monday" to a tee. I'm not the biggest fan of Mondays, yet you have to get through it to get back to the weekend.

My Favorite Part(s)

The last line of your poem made me chuckle. "Yet it is hard to get out of bed." Sums up the day perfectly.

Finally:

Thank you for sharing your work, and this tongue-in-cheek look at what is probably the least favorite day of the week.
I hope your WdC Anniversary is the best one yet. Good luck on your novel, and thanks for letting me lurk about your portfolio today. I'll be back, I'm sure.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear amy-Finally writing a novel. Author IconMail Icon ,

After checking out your work, My impressions are these:

This skull gives me steampunk vibes. It's a little creepy, but not over the top. I like the way the gears are used in the image.

My Favorite Part(s)

I'm also a fan of the font used for your nameplate. This is a very cool signature. I need to learn how to do these things for my own signatures as well.

Suggestions/Questions:

Do you have to have higher than an upgraded membership to do these images? I'll go on to other things in your port for the rest of my reviews today. Thanks for sharing!


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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