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Dear Joy Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

You've taken a lot of time with this contest, and the rules are spelled out clearly and concisely.

My Favorite Part(s)

Your encouragement to having others participate - being a winner just for entering.

Suggestions/Questions:

Maybe one year, you could update this contest for those who've not been here that long. It would be cool to enter a contest like this. Thank you for sharing and also for going the distance in working out this contst.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello Ned Author Icon

My First Impression:

Wow! The beach is memorialized in such a small space. You have taken a short poem and whittled it down to meet the criteria. I have such a hard time doing that, but you definitely made it look easy.

My Favorite Part:

The push and pull of the tides, the salty sea spray. It brought back memories of the Gulf Coast when a friend and I walked the beach.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

No suggestions, but thank you for sharing both poems. I enjoyed them both.

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Dear Kåre เลียม Enga Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

What a myriad of options here for the pond theme. I could see horror/thriller, I could see fantastical and just everyday ideas.

My Favorite Part(s)

I chose the "ice cracking" and "tree hugging", as it has always been a scary thought for me - falling through ice to the murkiness below. Not quite a phobia, but definitely uncomfortable.

Final Thoughts:

I like these kinds of polls, and now I have to decide what to do with the prompts. LOL. Thanks for sharing.


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AmyJo

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Review of Butterfly Name  Open in new Window.
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Dear Cadie Laine Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy 10th WdC Anniversary.

After looking at your artwork, My impressions are these:

A wonderful picture of butterflies lighting on a patch of wildflowers.

My Favorite Part(s)

The butterflies are white with black outlines. They are delicate, just like your name at the top of the image. So sweet.

Suggestions/Questions:

It's been a while, if ever, that I've perused your port. I look forward to seeing your writing in the future. I am a GOT fan, so I look forward to seeing your writing in that particular folder. Thanks for sharing.


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AmyJo

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Dear dogpack saving 4premium+ Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again, and have a wonderful 14th WdC Anniversary month! Your anniversary is just after my oldest grandson's birthday 5/4/2011.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

We pour so much into our pets, as they do to us. Having them leave for the Rainbow Bridge hurts so much. It is my hope that when we do get to heaven, that we will once again see our beloved pets, whole and happy; and happy to see us.

My Favorite Part(s)

Wonderful descriptors: a precious gift; friend and family forever.

Final Thoughts:

I hope you are doing well and catching up with all that you do. Blessings to you and yours.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello Krista Author Icon

My First Impression:

A thoughtful set of words relating to Catholicism. Nicely done.

My Favorite Part:

Many of the words have special meaning to me, a few of them are new to me as part of practice.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

The puzzle wouldn't let me finish, perhaps because Alleluia is in there twice? Not sure. But thank you for sharing part of your heart. I enjoyed it very much.

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Dear (user:jim-d} ,

Hi again, and happy 15th WdC Anniversary!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I honestly didn't know where this story was going...I was totally off base in my initial thoughts, but I cannot argue with the ending. HA!

My Favorite Part(s)

That you parlayed a truth in just 55 words. Spiders! Yuck!

Suggestions/Questions:

Was this a contest or challenge? If so, you accomplished it spot on. Thanks for the chuckle, as always. I hope you are enjoying your retirement, in spite of the prescription aggravation.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Soul sister Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy 24th WdC Anniversary! I saw your name on the anniversary list, so I thought I would check your port out. I don't remember seeing you about, but nonetheless, here I am.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I like how you open up the dialogue with honest questions. What does it take to make it into heaven? How can one honestly know? Very good questions, and you give a multitude of different answers that might come up. I am sure you've heard all of them, and maybe more.

My Favorite Part(s)

You come right to the point - repenting and believing in the Lord Jesus. Acknowledging one's need to be forgiven, and a change of direction. You do it in a kind way, where one doesn't feel like they've been "scripture-whipped".

Final thoughts:

I thank you for sharing this article, and for your thoughts on it. It is a great way to open up dialogue with others, and an avenue for planting seeds in order for a harvest of souls.

Thank you for sharing your heart. I'm glad I've read this.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear spidey Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I looked at your port opening "Welcome". It gives a little bit of bio information, and also some writing samples which are broken up into poetry, short stories and non-fiction.

My Favorite Part(s)

I absolutely love the wings on your signature image. They are beautiful.

Suggestions/Questions:

Happy 21st Anniversary here on WdC. What drew you to this site originally? Thank you so much for sharing part of yourself, and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear super sleuth Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy 21st WdC Anniversary!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Wow! This story hit me in ALL of the "feels". Christmas is my favorite time of year, but I can see why it wouldn't be for the main character of this narrative.

My Favorite Part(s)

I like the honest, if not ugly truth of this person. From not taking it seriously, to being run over with regret and pain. It is a bold and honest narrative, and he feels like he deserves his punishment. An innocent life taken, accidently, but still.

Suggestions/Questions:

What gave you inspiration for this story? It is dark and introspective. I hope this is not based on a true story in your life *Shock2* .

Thank you so much for sharing. I will have to come see your port again soon.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear super sleuth Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:Wow! What a story embedded into an acrostic poem. It definitely caught my attention.

My Favorite Part(s)

That Sebastion heard his lady love's final plea to burn the town down.

Suggestions/Questions:

I would love to see it turned into a story, whether a short story, or a full fledged one, I think that it would be awesome. Thank you for sharing your work, and happy 21st WdC Anniversary.

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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Amay Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy 15th WdC Anniversary!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

A delightful little ditty about one of a child's favorite time of year. Dressing up, going from home to home, yelling "Trick or Treat!" and rinse and repeat. Oh the candy hauls I remember from my own childhood.

My Favorite Part(s)

This could have gone so many ways, and not a lot of them fun and family friendly. I was happy to read something without worrying about a "jump scare" lurking about.

Suggestions/Questions:

Sum1 Author IconMail Icon said that your anniversary was coming up and encouraged people to come give you reviews. I hope that this review finds you well, and that we will see you again soon.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Adherennium Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi you! Happy 4th(!) WdC Anniversary!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

My, my! What lives your little "gweeps" have. I get a huge chuckle at their antics (and the antics of their creator).

My Favorite Part(s)

That Ralph, Toby and Graham have taken on a life of their own. I always look forward to reading more about them.

Suggestions/Questions:

How did you come up with your little Guinea pig characters? Did you raise guinea pigs as a youngster? My baby sister did. She had two, and they were a trip, especially in their little guinea pig balls and would go all over the place. It would drive the cat crazy. Thanks for sharing yourself and your little guys with us! Long may they "gweep"!


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello Krista Author Icon

My First Impression:

I enjoyed reading your essay. I agree for the most part, and I appreciate your stance when it comes to a moral life.

My Favorite Part:

That the Holy Spirit is there to guide and help us.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

May I ask what your affiliation is? I was raised Baptist, but have some Evangelical leanings. Thank you for sharing your work. It is much appreciated by me, for sure.

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Dear Emily Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again! Happy number 14 in the WdC world!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

You are one busy bee! There is a lot of goodies to look at here in your port. I wouldn't be able to do it all justice at this time, but I plan on doing some more nosing around as I can.

My Favorite Part(s)

Your portal is massive. I love how you've broken it down into many sections. I also love the "Hawaiian" Theme. Very creative.

Suggestions/Questions:

You said that you are an educator. What do you teach? Children or Adults? What kind of science do you geek over? LOL. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself. *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Joy Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary. 24 years is a long time, and I'm glad you were featured on the Anniversary Reviews page.

After looking around your port, My impressions are these:

First, thank you for the Mother's Day trinket that I found. Also, you are quite a busy person, with GOT items, RAOK things...love the c-notes by the way. Many different ways to say "Thank you". Very cool.



My Favorite Part(s)

I love all of the writing prompts that you have, and it inspires me to try and do some more writing. I've been on a Word Search kick, but I did start out my journey writing after I had gotten sick. Mending still, but still a long ways to go.

Suggestions/Questions:

I hope it is ok if I hijack some of your prompts for my own personal writing adventures. Thank you so much for sharing yourself and your writing with us. I hope you have many more WdC anniversaries to come.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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My First Impression:
An awesome word search. I found myself looking up a couple of words. I don't think I've covered this material before.

My Favorite Part:

I had to look up what Detrivore meant. I think you missed a couple of letters...
detritivore. But I had heard of the other three: omni- herbi- and carni- vores. Well done!


My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Other than that, no problems I saw. It reminds me of walking in the woods in Michigan, looking for Morel mushrooms, or out deer watching. Thank you for sharing this puzzle. I'm sure Webbie will like it, too.

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Dear the last cicada Author IconMail Icon ,

Hope your WdC Anniversary month was a great one.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I very much would love to have a c-note shop. No idea where to begin, but your choice of colors and pictures are bright and wonderful.

My Favorite Part(s)

I like how you have c-notes with or without trinkets. That is pretty cool. I didn't know you could do that.

Suggestions/Questions:

This would be a great thing to advertise during WdC anniversary in September and also November/December for Christmas. I hope you do advertise. Thank you for sharing your work and your creative bent for c-notes.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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My First Impression:

I enjoyed your bouncy little poem. You list several types of flowers, and a warning to be careful when planting "eye candy" in the form of flowers. Pets, as wonderful as they are, can be like children and sneak a taste, sometimes with bad consequences.

My Favorite Part:

My favorite flower is the yellow rose. I could watch them all summer. But I also remember crocuses poking through the snow when I lived in Michigan. I love the different flowers you wrote about. Each has their own beauty and charm.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Having had pets before, I also had to be careful of the indoor plants I choose. My favorite is the spider plant. I love how the "babies" grew into new plants and the cascading effect they had. I don't have to worry too much about pets now that I live with my kids, but I have my memories. I was lucky with my pets/plants. Only ever had one cat that menaced my indoor plants, but no effects could I see, other than chewed leaves.

Thank you for sharing your work, and thanks for letting me ramble.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Hello Jay O'Toole Author Icon

My First Impression:

This poem works wonderfully with all you have going on in life. I think you've more than met the parameters of the Solage.

My Favorite Part:

A new chapter awaits you. Enjoy the beauty and peace from God in this transitional time. I would perhaps have used the word "Recovery" for the word Vacation. LOL

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us on a regular basis. You are appreciated!

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Dear Schnujo's Doing Homework Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

This contest is well thought out and looks to be pretty popular.

My Favorite Part(s)

Tickets are paid for by reviews. Looking at last year, I had participated in this activity. Looking forward to this September's party!

Final thoughts:

It says you've been here nine years, but it seems like you are around so much more than your years would indicate. You are an inspiration, and I'm glad to know you.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Purple Catching Up Author IconMail Icon ,

After looking over your work, My impressions are these:

You had me at Detroit Lions. Loved this poster for sure.

My Favorite Part(s)

Anything Lions. They are my favorite team. Hoping that changing the coaching staff won't stop them this season; and dear Goodness! Please stop with the injuries! *Hug1**Frown**Hug2*

Final Thoughts:

Obviously, I am biased toward the Lions, even now living in Texas. LOL. Thank you so much for sharing this little bit of nostalgia. Keep up the great work, and I hope to nose around your port in the future.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Dorianne Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy 19th WdC Anniversary.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

It always hurts to lose a beloved pet, especially if the pet is in pain.

My Favorite Part(s)

You expressed your desire to have Stubby back, but not if the pain came back, too. You would rather miss your pet than to have him in pain.

Suggestions/Questions:

Thank you for sharing your writing. I hope to read more of your work in the future.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Jeremy Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again! Hope your anniversary is going well!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

LOL...it wasn't so much reading, as it was a photo. Is this you? How recent is it?

My Favorite Part(s)

If this is you, what a baby-face. You don't look old enough to be here 22 years.

Suggestions/Questions:

An updated picture, like a then/now kinda thing? Just curious. Thanks for all that you do here. And yes, you ARE Cool - not just somewhere, but here. You are appreciated!


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Teargen Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary to you.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

COVID certainly disrupted people's plans for quite a while. I like your version of a "staycation".

My Favorite Part(s)

My mom is an avid bird watcher. I like the descriptions of the different birds you describe. The funniest is the robin, with its fat red belly hopping around. I also like the majestic heron. I would say for me, a favorite is the pilated woodpecker. He is huge with a bright red crest. Have you seen one?

Final thoughts:

Now that Covid is "over" do you still enjoy watching birds? Thank you for sharing your staycation with me. I'm glad to have read it.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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