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Review by Aislinn Roxley Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful poem. You accomplished a simple and beautiful rhyme rhythm, you make it look so easy!
I saw neither spelling errors nor grammar errors.
The feelings evoked in this poem is one of the best parts and also one of the worst parts. You brought forth your emotions and I felt as if I was feeling them myself. I am so sorry though that you have to suffer this way.
Once again, this is a truly beautiful work, keep on writing and keep on praying, and I'll pray with you at my end of the world!
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Review by Aislinn Roxley Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this one, I feel the same about the dreaded V-day. I don't understand what "Grandpas farm" has to do with the poem though. Also remember that since the farm is Grandpa's that there should an apostrophe ( ' ) between Grandpa and the s. Also, I don't understand the part that reads "*disgusted* ". I just don't understand what that is supposed to mean. That might be just me not catching it though. So overall, great work! Keep it up :)
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Review by Aislinn Roxley Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That's beautifully written, albeit sad.
I have to say, I didn't see any misspellings, which is something I usually notice straight off the bat.
I also love the rhyming, I know how hard that can be. I have so much trouble rhyming that I don't usually try it.
Keep up the great work!
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