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Review of THE ROAD OF LIFE  Open in new Window.
Review by Athena Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love the flow of the format used. The descriptions had me picturing the scenes in my head. It had me feeling his burden and load. Great piece. Keep on writing!
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Review of Vacation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I would have liked to see more description of the time spent together. It also seemed hard to read. The flow and rhythm seemed to be lacking a little. All together it was good. Enjoyable. Keep on writing!!
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Review by Athena Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very nice flow to the story. I love the concept of the nagging wife. Even in death she gives him no peace.
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Review by Athena Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved this piece. You can just feel the love oozing from it. Thanks so much for sharing.
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Review of I Think of Heaven  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought the visualization of your words was great. I followed your path the whole step of the way. Very nice.
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Review of Just a Fairytale  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Really loved this poem. The whole fairytale theme is great.
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Review of Her Tears  Open in new Window.
Review by Athena Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great thinking piece.
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