Hey. I picked this poem because I'm aware of Seasonal Affective Disorder or lonely in winter. I feel the poem's quietness and muteness like words on snow. It is very deep emotionally contemplative. I think the shortness of the poem does well with the cold loneliness like one bright spot as well as no specific rhyming pattern-random. Very bleak and white both snow and moon. Overall tone, structure, and words work for the poem. I wouldn't change a thing. Do you have trouble in the winter? I can get depressed and keeping a sparkly, winter decoration up after Christmas helps. Just something that might help if you need it. Keep up the great work. THanks for sharing.
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