I like a story I can read that is compelling enough to keep me reading, albeit, confused. The last line tied it all together, nicely done there. After reading the last sentence, I went back and re-read the whole thing, which now made complete sense and prompted my own story line behind what was written. How he died, how long he had been there etc...fun to read.
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