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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Its kinda good, but I thought it would be better if there is a fight in this chapter. So it will be more roughly or whatever it called. And maybe you should add more explanation about the era, what its look like and etc. So the reader willnot lost. By the way its good, keep going okay. I'll look forward, oh yeah my spelling not really good please understand.. ^^
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