Wow! This shows the reader the happy anxiety the main character is having awaiting her "Prince Charming" with "hair as dark as midnight" and other intriguing details. I feel like I am sitting in the background waiting for that ol' faithful cuckoo! I have that same anxiety. Well, mine happens to be almost ALL the time! Great first poem! Keep it up!
Wow! This was a very detailed horror, on-my-toes, short story! Loved how, every paragraph kept me wanting to read on! Keep up the awesome writing skills! Would love to see more works from you soon! By the way, in case you didn't notice, we started using this writing site at almost the same exact time! You started yesterday. I just started 10 days ago! Congrats on this amazing short-story! I never could have guessed what would have ended up happening. I love how you turned the plot, and twisted it to give the readers a "wow" factor! Amazing job! You deserve a big 5 star rating!
WOW! I was starting to shake with anticipation. I never would have guessed the total change in the plot! Incredible craftsmanship with the wording! Well-written and had me laughing in the end! Keep up the great short stories! I absolutely LOVE IT!!
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