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Rated: E | (3.0)
I believe you mean "one of the only white men" in the first paragraph : ). I am not a religious person, so I do not understand the biblical references, but if I were a Christian I think I would have had a higher respect for them. You created a character that sparked empathy and I could tell where he was coming from.
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