Possibly my favorite. This little limerick gives us a great sense of fun and gets us ready for the autumn spirit. Which could be hauntingly fun! Thanks for the share and a great job to you!
Excellent, excellent, excellent! This poem gives the reader the opportunity to look and read in one's own perspective. Giving light to what they percieve this poem to be, but also allowing for a hidden agenda. The author has written this poem with great elegance, and it flows smoothly for the reader.
I enjoyed this poem very much, but it seemed that there should be something more there. I felt a little adrift through this poem and the ending left me wanting to find out more. Of course, this is merely my opinion. I didn't find any grammar or spelling errors, and, again, the rhyme pattern here was strong.
Great! Excellent! I love this poem. It brings about the darkness and the haunts that reside within, but the light it produces gives me a happy and familiar feeling from childhood memories. It flows smoothly from beginning to end and has a strong rhyme pattern that helps. Thank you so much for sharing!
Excellent! The rhythym and rhyme of this poem is perfect. Its description gives both sides of the feelings on a relationship gone wrong and the feelings of the one that is cursed as well as the one that curses. I found no grammar or spelling errors within this poem.
Excellent! I can relate so well and easily to this poem. I can feel the misery and the pain as it chokes through the pages and grasps ahold of my heart. It flows well, and has the reader's attention from the beginning to the end. I found no errors. Thank you for sharing!
What a delightful little story! The author has the ability to keep the reader engrossed in this story, even while they are confused about where it is leading. But, I have to say, the ending is the real getter! Nope, I'm not going to tell what it is, just recommend that everyone take a look at this story!
Another excellent story. This one really hits home for me as I remember those same type of days at my grandmother's house. How it looks so different now, as my kids rush to find a movie to watch or a video game to play. No longer do I hear about the shapes in the sky or the trips to the creek. The kids now days are lost to the new age era and the good old days are gone. But, this author brings back those wonderful memories in this story. Great job!
Excellent! This short stories brings the reader into the pages with an abundance of vivid pictures. Granted, it is painted through words, but the author gives such details that the reader has no problem seeing the picture in their mind's eye! I found no errors in this story and truly enjoyed the nature it gives us!
I truly enjoyed reading this poem. It brings to life the many feelings that are surrounding a relationship. Whether it be love or something else, the feelings of joy and hurt and confusion blend well in this poem to explain how the thoughts and frustrations. It flows smoothly and is well-written. I found no errors. Good job!
Excellent. I really enjoyed this poem. The question lies in wait for an answer, and this author has given a picture of that answer. This poem flows nicely and captures the reader's attention from beginning while holding it through the end. I found no grammar or spelling errors. Great job!
A deeply moving poem. The frustrations scream out while the pain and hurt bleeds through to the reader. This poem speaks levels of the love felt and the tide of emotions and thoughts that run through one's mind. It is easily connected with and flows smoothly for the reader. Great job!
I really enjoyed the uplifting feelings from this poem. I found that even though some of the lines were long, there was a rhythym to them that kept them going. They rhyme pattern in this poem was good and kept the poem flowing smoothly. I think they hidden rhymes in the longer lines helped it stay smooth. A mere suggestion would be to break those longer lines down, but that is only my opinion.
How sweet! This reminds me so much of my sweet dog. He was nothing more than a mutt, but he was the best mutt a person could own. This poem expresses the close bond that a human can have with a dog. It flows smoothly and expresses the emotions well. Great job!
An excellent poem with steady rhythym and rhyme. There are moments of wistfulness and some of bittersweet memories that lurk in this poem. Momentarilly, I felt as if there was a daydream turned nightmare. The longings reach out to the reader as if to beg for a light to shine to show the way. Of course, this is merely my perception. I enjoyed reading this poem and loved how easily it flowed.
There's always a first time. This, is it for me. This poem. It flows beautifully, but the thoughts in the authors mind is not conveyed to me. That is the first. This author has deep thoughts, that is shown, but where the lead to and from are something that each reader is on their own to figure out. I found no errors in this poem.
A sweet and tender poem. I could almost hear the laughter on the wind, and feel the touch of a butterfly. This poem brings back memories of yesterday and all the things lost. A truthful poem of living life in the moment as we never know what tomorrow brings. I found no errors and enjoyed this poem.
This is a beautiful love poem. It expresses the feelings and fears well. The only problem that I had with this poem is that it seemed the rhythym changed a lot. This slowed down the flow for me. The author might try keeping the rhythym a little more steady.
An interesting concept that I've never thought of. Such beauty is expressed within this. There was something about this poem that truly gives one a moment's pause to think. Truth. Although the poem reached out to me, there was something in this missing. Unfortunately, I cannot pinpoint exactly what it was. I wish I could be more help.
Excellent description to a world of infinite possibilities. Writing brings forth more creative pieces of art. Through writing a new world can be seen every day. This author gives us a glimpse of the possibilities and shows us a love that can forever be cherished within this poem. Great job!
A beautiful unfolding of summer's past, withering into a winter wonderland. This poem expresses thoughtful days of tranquilty in the autumn smell of crimson and orange leaves. There were a couple of areas that the rhythym was off just a bit for me. Line number four seemed to pull a little harder on the rhythym. Otherwise, it flows nicely with a steady beat. Great job.
A short, bittersweet poem that tells of a love gone wrong. The deep sorrow is felt within the words spoken. It flows smoothly and has a good rhythym. The last line draws out just a bit, but it blends well with the ending. Good job and I look forward to reading more.
I like the idea and thoughts that are in this poem. But, the last stanza rhymes where as the rest of the poem does not. It kind of throws off the rhythm of the poem. Otherwise, it is a very good poem and it flows well. I found no spelling or grammar errors.
And born into the written word a powerful poem was. This poem is great! Written with truth and feelings, it reaches out and grabs the readers attention beginning with the title. It shows the truth and the belief in powers greater than us, giving us a moment's pause. Great job making the poem flow smoothly!
Excellent! This poem is a wonderful and inspirational treat to the weary mind and soul. It presents us with a truth of trusting love that cannot be denied. Some things are better left unexplained, but this poem gives us explanation where it is needed. Great job!
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