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Mandy, your haiku (Senryu styling) "Summer" could become a sublime Haiku,
that would be both a written, as well as a read aloud, poem....
if the last line was changed and a "cutting" symbol added*

Ah - now summer reigns

( this is also a pun in English! )
* in English, to add a cutting symbol in Haiku, often a dash is used, as well/or using "So" or "How"
And now, onto happier things! 😁
I have so much stuff I need to express out loud right now.
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