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I could really use help with one of my poems. I'm having trouble with the third stanza and couplet. It's called "He's Gone" and it's the first item in my portfolio. Over 300gp to anyone who reviews! Thank you so much...
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Since June 10th I am a high school graduate!

I've worked hard and long for these days and I'm certain it was a well spent wait. My English teachers since 9th grade have helped and inspired me to write in all the ways they could. I'm very grateful for all they have helped me accomplish. After all, I wouldn't be on writing.com if they hadn't inspired me to write my first poem!
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Congratulations! The journey begins...
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When I was two years old, I was in a trailer fire.


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I was burned in a house fire when I was two years old. I still have memories of the fire. It's very traumatizing. I wrote my memories down in a poem called Painful Memories.
I wanted to invite you to join our teen forum. You can find some friends who have things in common with you. Drop in and say hello.

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I've been working on my writing for a long time. Sometimes I can't stand to read my own poetry because it's difficult to even consider them poems; sometimes they're just so terrible. Other times I'm obsessed with my poetry and share it with everyone I know. Sometimes I even read it multiple times just for the heck of it. Right now I'm updating some of the writing I haven't put on WDC yet so I can share it all with the world. I hope to publish a book someday. I hope you all have goals that keep you writing even if your items seem just plain idiotic. Have a wonderful day (night?)
I've recently finished this story and would like to share it with you. It's a short story about a teen who commits suicide. The topic has been on my mind so I decided to express it and share my feeling with the world. Sincerely. SodaSaya

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Hello everyone! How have you been?
I've recently written this poem called The Half-hidden Moon and I need it to be reviewed soon so I can publish it. I've requested reviews but haven't received any and I can't seem to make the poem public enough for the community to notice it. Can you please give me a review? I've been so busy lately with my home life and with school just ending that I haven't been able to spend much time on making reviews myself, but I plan on making that a goal for this coming summer. Thanks
~SodaSaya~

 
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It's queer, things feel different. I feel different...
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