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A young woman finds a body in the woods and encounters the killer, still there.
The Eyes

Name a disease to say it's only your eyes that burn, when you know that isn't true. Black smoke seeps through the cracks. You blow it away, far away from you. I can't even say that it's you I see. Wave this way, speak, at least reach out to me. What are you moaning? The smoke burns your eyes? I'm blinded too love. Were both going to die.
I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
 Struck  Open in new Window. [13+]
A young woman finds a body in the woods and encounters the killer, still there.
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 A riddle- what am i Open in new Window. [E]
This is a riddle in a poetic form. A little bit of word play. Have fun guessing.
it's a riddle. but I didn't give the answer. That was silly of me. So i put the answer at the bottom of page.
I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
 Struck  Open in new Window. [13+]
A young woman finds a body in the woods and encounters the killer, still there.
I fixed the tense to all present. And took out some unnecessary sentences. Wow this is hard.
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 Struck  Open in new Window. [13+]
A young woman finds a body in the woods and encounters the killer, still there.
I wrote it about eight years ago. I changed the title from "Struck by a Purpose" to "Struck by Fright. Boy did it need editing, grammar corrections, punctuation corrections, the whole nine yards. I hope you like it.
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 A riddle- what am i Open in new Window. [E]
This is a riddle in a poetic form. A little bit of word play. Have fun guessing.
Thank you LadyMariah. This website has given me a new swing in my step, does that make sense?
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