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Almost three months after, here's the next chapter of my adult erotic story:
This one has our hero Armando fully immersed in the act of wearing a skinsuit, but unlike other stories of its kind where the suit is downright magical and the wearer immediately loves being a woman, there's some resistance. I feel skinsuit stories could use some degree of realism, even though the suit itself is far more advanced than anything we could currently create. I hope I reach that degree of verisimilitude, where you can easily suspend your disbelief and enjoy the story. (And yes, that includes putting the main character into the body of a plain woman with defects rather than a hot woman. But don't worry; at some point, hot women will appear.) |
It's been a while.
This is the next chapter following "An Unexpected Proposal"  , where the eponymous proposal is finally revealed. As you can see, it is more complex than set on the previous chapter, and with an unexpected twist. Furthermore, we finally see our protagonist wearing one of Evelyn's skinsuits. How will it fare? What new experiences will he live as Mathilda? As usual - note that this story is meant for adults, and thus has very vivid depictions. Please show your support if you want to see more. |
I promised I'd work it out during the weekend at my Weekly Goals post ("UPDATE: 2 out of 3 ain't bad, innit? (7/28)" ), and while I finished it today, I started it *during* the weekend. Here's the follow-up to "Escape from Dhagor Keep"
It's less action-based and more focused on world-building, but it also serves to flesh out Hendak and Degor a lot more. It should be obvious by now that Hendak is cunning, but I'd like to explore his viciousness a bit more. I intend to show how he got the cart, because it serves as a good exploration on how a villain can be vicious and ruthless without being comically so. I also want to explore Degor a bit more, as he's setting up to be the "token good teammate". Hopefully the pace isn't too slow - I wanted to give them a bit of respite after their daring escape, hence their lengthy conversation. Rest assured that that their escape wasn't unnoticed, and that it won't be left unchronicled. |
Hey everyone. Here's the follow-up to "The Law of the Luchador"
There's a lot of references to real-life wrestling, but it's set on an alternate universe where most of the major wrestling promotions never existed. There's no WWE, no WCW, no ECW, no New Japan, no Consejo Mundial de la Lucha Libre, etc. It should be obvious who's the RL counterpart to El Caballero de Plata (the cover spoils it), but I wanted a spin for his son. It's a pretty emotional chapter with some humor mixed in. There's also the appearance of a new character - one that'll cause some problems in the future. Next chapter should show a bit of the internals of the Millenium Wrestling Association. What do you think of the story so far? Is it a fair representation of the wrestling culture in the US? Is it fun? |
Hey everyone. Decided to post the follow-up to "An Indecent Proposal" [GC]:
As I mentioned before, this is meant to be part of a longer story, one that touches on intrigue and deception and full of candid moments, but also a touching one. This chapter has less sexual content but it has nudity and therefore it retains the same rating as the previous one. It's also meant to expand the world a bit. As with before, I'd appreciate reviews of both chapters (and any other show of appreciation - *wink, wink*), but most specifically, I'd like to hear if you want more content like this. |
Hey everyone. Here's the other prompt I wanted to work with. I wanted to write a fantasy story from the perspective of villains, but ones that are actually smart and sensible. Hopefully I nailed it.
My apologies to readers that are fluent in Klingon if I screwed up the grammar. I thought it'd be an interesting twist on a language meant for a sci-fi universe. |
Hey everyone. Here's one of two prompts I wanted to work with, a first chapter for a longer story much like my first item, but this one's meant for a wider audience. Though it uses a trope from my other story (the use of a "skinsuit"), the focus is much different - wrestling, which I've loved since I was a kid. I had this idea running in my mind and I hope I translated it well enough for you to enjoy it.
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| Hey everyone. I usually contribute to "The Book of Masks" and "The Wandering Stars" , but I decided to post something on my own: "An Indecent Proposal" . (Note: not safe for work; sexual content.) It's essentially a prompt - a first chapter that's nonetheless self-contained - for a longer story, mostly to gauge interest on stories like this. It's a very important milestone for me, and I'd appreciate if you were to review it for improvement and support if you like it. |
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Happy Account Anniversary 
Happy Writing.Com account anniversary. 
Apart from that, it reads fine. The concept of skins is interesting; how do they wash themselves?
Good luck going forward!
I can say that it's set at least during the 2010s (probably early in the decade, as Internet becomes more ubiquitous), but there's still a lot of differences. I'm trying to make fights less worked - next chapter or two should show how the MWA handles combats, and subsequently how FAWN handles them, and how they approach "sports entertainment".
As for the Kaufman situation - it's a bit complex. Overall, the main changes in this story regarding ours is how wrestling evolved everywhere - US, Mexico, Japan and elsewhere. Again, it's too early to speak about it, but it's reasonable that there was a territory that got crushed by the AAWF in the same way the WWF/E dealt with the NWA, but it's also possible that Kaufman made his appearances in the AAWF itself, being the premier wrestling promotion, or whatever preceded the AAWF, and challenged women wrestlers before getting into a shoot fight with someone. (As a note: Ross LaQuale is a former wrestler, as most color commentators are, and he mixes aspects of Gorilla Monsoon and Jerry "the King" Lawler, so it's possible that "the Boss" was the one that fought Kaufman instead.)
As for how Blanchard's victory might influence the perception of intra-gender championships - I can't say much since I've mostly seen WWF/E and local promotions, as well as following a few wrestlers and see a few fights from AAA in Mexico. However, I feel that the story's reflecting the second Women's revolution in wrestling - well past Chyna, Lita, Trish and Mickie James showing a women's division could have interesting fights, but before, say, Beth Phoenix or Natalya or Awesome Kong or Gail Kim. (Definitely not the current trend - though I'm certainly a fan of Asuka and Becky Lynch.) That said, you might've noticed that Vernon's a little misogynistic, though he can see how a strong woman's division can help the business. And Esteban is old-fashioned, so there's that too.
As for the washing? That's for later, but I have to keep it 13+, so that'll be a challenge.