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Hello! I've been working on chapter two of my book and I like how it's coming along! I've decided to share a small part of it to prove I've been working on it.

Fear kicking in, I started to panic. It looked like the small monster but huge, with sharper teeth and a much more rotund shape. From all the ruckus of me running, Anti was jostled awake, he looked up from behind my back to see the giant thing chasing us.

Please take into note this hasn't gone through my editor yet, and I'm posting the entire chapter two whole, unlike chapter one which was in batches and then edited into one final thing. I'm trying my best, with everything else I have to do, to get this done, so I hope the wait will be worth it.


Salutations. I have best of news.
I have published the full, edited, chapter one of my book.
On top of this, I have removed the old versions of chapter one because this one is by far better.
I am really happy with how it turned out and will soon work on chapter two.
Read on, and may your creativity soark your wildest dreams.
- Mans
hello fellow authors and book worms!

I am proud to announce that I have got a editor and am working on revising and editing chapter one of my book, so expect me to post a full revised chapter one whenever it's done (Sadly I do not have a given date or time.)

I also haven't been here because I've had work and a lot other stuff going on... but I am setting aside some time for Hero from the void!

If you still haven't read the unedited versions, go ahead. if you want to wait for the revised chapter one, I won't judge you, in fact, I encourage it!

Best of days to everyone here. my book is calling me, so off I go now.
I just looked at the Noticing newbees newsletter and I'm so exited!

My first part of chapter one from Hero from the Void is on there as a editor pick!

I'm so excited and happy I don't know what to do!

Oh, wait, I do know what to do.

Expect part 4 rather soon (;
Salutations. I am Mr. Mans.

I would like to ask some people a question, for I am afraid I am struggling with one of the worst things an author can have; A creativity block.

You see, for as much ideas I have for my main book, Hero from the void, I have not the time to explain a lot of things about the fantasy world.

I have relied on letting the reader know later on when it pops up, but that can tend to be a little too much...

So I ask this: can someone give me a prompt and I will incorporate it into a short story. I would like to hear someone else's ideas on what would be cool, so not only my creativity would flow but yours could too- by reading a good story.

Sincerely,
Mr. Mans.
Hey everyone-

I'm sad to say I didn't realize there was a community news feed until now... oops!

anywho, I'm rather new here, and I'd like some tips and tricks to help me (I'm pretty sure I don't even know half the website yet LOL.)

If anyone also has any suggestions or anything for my book series, Extera and the Etherians, then please do give ideas! (I'm willing to even add your character into my books if you ask and I like your book)

Best of luck to all you readers and writers out there from
Mr. Mans
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Hello! I'm Manster Mon Mans (A little alias I use so I don't give away my name) But you can call me Mr. Mans. I'm honestly rather new to this website, but I'm not new to the passion for literature. I just simply enjoy writing, and love to read. I wish to further indulge my desire to become a great author, and I'd like some help.

I've posted the first two parts to chapter one of my book. I'd appreciate any feedback I could get.
Also to note that I don't have a editor and I have no clue how I could get one, I also could use some tips and tricks for this amazing website.

Best of regards,
Mr. Mans
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