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| Writing Question: I was looking up point of view trying to decide the perspective for my novel, Nezoom. What is the difference, if any, between first-person peripheral and third-person close? The only thing I can come up with is a question of familiarity. But does that really come into play? |
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Narrative Position: First-person peripheral is narrated by a character within the story, while third-person close is narrated by an external observer.
Great question! (I asked Copilate and this is the response:)
Scope of Knowledge: First-person peripheral is limited to what the narrator knows and observes, whereas third-person close can delve deeply into the thoughts and feelings of the focal character.
Reader’s Connection: First-person peripheral can create a sense of intrigue and distance, as the narrator might not know everything about the protagonist. Third-person close offers a more direct connection to the focal character’s inner world.