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| hi everybody. I wrote something and I'd appreciate if you tell me what do you think about it. Thank you. A deadly self-acknowledgment Don't let me down, I screamed, cried, begged. It was a dark night in a full moon. I was left behind in a desert-like area which was dirty and dusty. It seemed there could not have been found even a soul. The shadows haunted me and I was too desperate to escape. I bled black liquid as though my blood had turned to oil. My life dangled from emptiness. The whole thing got uncanny. In a bright flash, desert passed me by as an ocean appeared. I was drifting in water while I felt my body was roped to a canoe steering towards a foggy island. Then in the twinkling of an eye, the canoe cast me off. I was free. All ropes were gone. Hell, I was sinking into the middle of the pure water. A sensation of numbness swallowed me. Suddenly everything was gone. I was no more frustrated. I was thoroughly filled up with joy. I felt stillness though I was trying in vain to fetch the floating rope. Disappointing to reach the island, I stopped breathing. It was the perfect moment of self-acknowledgement. I met myself right in the memorable moment of non-existence. Asma v |
| I found it like a prose. Welcome to WDC! |
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