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I'm going to follow Raven ![]() ![]() The frist thing is to go back and add some character and romance beats to yesterday's chapter in my WIP, "The Cave of Worlds" ![]() Next, I want to work through the details about the location and strategies for the next big battle scene, the one that is supposed to be the climax of the quest. I've got that in general, but not in particular. Ending the quest is kind of the "false victory," as it serves to launch another phase of the character arc and romance arc...but I'm not planning to follow the romance or quest beats exactly...we'll see how it goes. Assuming I get both those things done, the last writing step is to draft chapter 19, where the characters actually learn stuff about the location of the battle and develop their strategies for surmounting the obstacles. Not sure I can get the last thing done, though, as I've got to be taxi driver for Mr. Gene who still can't drive due to his rotator cuff surgery. That'll take up part of the morning and much of the afternoon, after which I need to fix dinner. I'm thinking maybe italian sausage, mushrooms, and gnocchi, which will give a few days of leaved-overs for me to eat. |
This seems at first glance like an organizational aid without peer, but really, {sarcasm}what I really need is something else to distract or replace my writing time in the morning.{/sarcasm} I can only admire all you writers with these tricks and aids to keep yourselves on track. One more reason I never hit the Big Time, I suspect ... ![]() |
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I'm off to SoonerCon in Norman, OK for the weekend. If any WDC members will be there, let me know! It'll be a chance to meet FTF. I'll also be on three panels: writing non-human protagonists, AI Art, and "Are we living in a simulation." These appear to be mostly unstructured discussions rather more conventional panels where speakers present differing perspectives...we'll see how it goes. It's my second SF con and my first as a presenter. |
Oh man, not only that Iβd like to meet you FTF, Iβd SO love to discuss the simulation thing. Imagine the possibilities!![]() Youβre gonna rock the show, of course ![]() ![]() |
Oliviaβs met 4 astronauts! ![]() ![]() |
That's so awesome! Alas, I won't be there, but I'm excited for you and those who have the opportunity to meet you! Enjoy yourself!!! |
Okay, I've spent the last two days writing an essay on the Lorentz equation. I don't imagine there are more than one or two people on here who would have even the vaguest interest in this subject, but here goes. The Lorentz equation describes the difference in time between a moving observer and a stationary observer. tm = g ts where tm is time measured by the moving observer and ts is time measured by the stationary observer. It's a simple equation, like E=mc2, but one that's hard to understand. The constant g is always greater than one, so the usual interpretation is that one second for a moving observer is longer than it is for a stationary observer. This usually only matters when the moving observer is going at a considerable fraction of the speed of light. However, the accuracy of the GPS systems we all use rely on using this equation. In any case, the usual facile explanation about time slowing down when you speed up isn't quite correct. I had a story submitted to me at Tales from the Crosstimbers that misinterpreted this, which is what led me to writing the essay. While I was thinking about it, I realized that, unlike the more famous Einstein equation everyone knows, this one doesn't require any deep mathematics. It's possible do deduce the Lorentz equation just using Euclidian geometry. It's remarkable that such a profound fact has such a simple foundation. That's in this short essay, too, along with an explanation of what it does and does not mean. Like I said...I'll be amazed if anyone actually reads this, but it was kind of fun to write. The essay is at "Time Dilation" ![]() |
A subject I know a little about and enjoy, you have written fantastically about it. Right triangles and the Pythagorean theorem is the perfect way to help anyone realize that time dilation is all about frame of reference and that time truly is relative. I have done similar exercises for the light clock on the train. Fantastically, done. Two things are quite amazing about this story. When Einstein came up with Special Relativity and this insight about time, it upended a millennia of scientific and common sense. Everyone, including the late Isaac Newton knew time was a universal absolute. It was like saying up is down and down is up. The other amazing thing is Einstein realized this Special Relativity, didnβt deal with acceleration and he sense gravity was equivalent to acceleration. So it sent him on the great quest that changed the shape of our universe in general relativity. |
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In case anyone is interested...I made some minor changes to my little essay on the Lorentz Time Dilation equation. I added a cover, made the type bigger, corrected a few typos, and polished the exposition in a couple of places. The new, and improved essay is at: "Time Dilation" ![]() You can also find it at Tales from the Crosstimbers. ![]() |
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Not sure if you're familiar with Finding Nemo. But all I can think of when I read "brouhaha" is the chant during this scene |
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I'm pleased to announce that the Summer Issue of Tales from the Crosstimbers is now available. Click below for Kindle and Amazon Print edtition links. Starting tomorrow and until Saturday, the Kindle edition is free. WDC author Raven ![]() ![]() |
I've written a flash fiction horror story. I'm not good at either flash fiction or horror, so I'd appreciate feedback. It's rated 18+ due to some graphic descriptions, so I don't want to link it here, but if you're interested, I'll send you a link or you can find it, titled "The Coven," at the top of
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New title, new cover, and new teaser for my WIP Sebastian likes his new job, except for all the distractions. His OCD forces him to constantly check stuff out, like that hunky guy he spotted going into the mysterious office down the hall. When Sebastian checks him out, he winds up joining a desperate quest to save the Cave of Worlds, a system of wormholes and the realms they connect. |
Oliviaβs met 4 astronauts! ![]() |
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More doodling...a marginally better cover for my WIP "The Cave of Worlds" ![]() ![]() |
It was a gift from Carol Beasley, a well-known Oklahoma artist.
Some of her other work is at https://www.artsy.net/artist/carol-beesley
or
https://arts.ok.gov/art_at_the_capitol/East_Gallery/2012/Carol_Beesley_East_Gall...
She's awesome.
I want an office one of these days. Right now, I'm just shooting more for a stable place to live, but I need to get my act together and get myself and my finances stable first. lol
Then a place of my own in a neighborhood that I can safely/comfortably walk around in at night is next on the list. When in LA, I have an apartment, but it's not in a safe neighborhood and I can't be off the property alone at night unless I'm in a car. Though last summer I wasn't even comfortable being there on the property, which is why when I left for a 5-day visit to Alabama, I didn't return. Two different neighbors (plus one of their friends) in 2 different incidents 3 nights apart got very badly beaten (and I think one was sexually assaulted). Worse, all 3 victims were guys! So, if that happens to them, what about girls like me?!? And 1 was just an innocent grad student sleeping at 1 am when a bunch of hoodlums came, removed his exterior bulb, then started pounding on his door demanding water. He opened the wooden door to see who it was, thinking he was safe because we have metal security doors, but seeing he was home, they came through his window instead, then opened his door -- like 20 of them! (We have cameras, so maybe not exactly 20, but a LOT!)
Anyway, my other neighbor and his friend were assaulted on his porch, but he has an exterior porch, facing off the property. I have an interior one. And I don't sit on my porch and am not usually out and about at 11 pm...though I happened to be that night because I found him very upset and arguing on the phone, trying to get the police to come. They didn't want to. They wanted him to come down to the station to file his report. He'd had both his work and personal cars stolen, too. Plus, they'd also gotten into his apartment. He'd ended up with his leg injured, his sternum broken, his friend had his nose broken. They're big, buff guys, but it was 4 against 2. Anyway, that's why I left LA for a 5-day visit to Alabama last August and haven't been back. lol
Returning to my plan to get an office, then maybe in 5-7 years, I can put office in on the list. Yep, it's a ways off, still. But it can happen, I think. I just need to get other things in my life taken care of first.
Thanks for sharing your spaces, gentlemen!