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Added a description to my portfolio. I'd love any and all feedback on where I can improve on it. The title is "Xanadu Cassowary." (Sorry, I don't know how to link it in here.)

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Hi! You can create a link to your item by taking the item's ID (found under the title on your portfolio page) and then typing the following:

{citem:2249520} or {item:2249520}

That will then create a link! The citem creates a larger-style link whereas the item link is just the title. *Smile*

Hope that helps!

 Xanadu Cassowary Open in new Window. [E]
A bird in my fantasy world on World Anvil. I'd love feedback on where to improve.
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Greetings! I couldn't help but notice the (1) next to your handle. I'll bet if you click on My Account and then Achievements, that'll change! *Wink*
Been spending lots of time working on my new fantasy novel on WorldAnvil. It's got so many features that it's got me spinning in circles. Imagine being dropped into your favorite fantasy world and all you want to do is take in and see everything you can so you spin around as you walk through the world. That's me right now on WorldAnvil. I need to visit here a bit more often though, especially since I had an awesome follower from Wattpad follow me here so she could finish reading one of my stories. To that follower, I say:

Sorry it's taking so long for me to get that story up here for you. Once I get a story idea in my mind, it blocks everything else out and so many ideas for this new story have been flooding my brain. I promise I haven't forgotten you and will get that story up soon!

I have three relatively short scenes for this fantasy novel on my profile here: Inyarel, Return of the Dead, and Desmond Taken. If anyone wants to take a read and give constructive critiques on them, I'd love to hear how I can improve them!
I know I've been off for about two weeks. I've been having issues with my mobile hotspot going out too fast (odd considering I've done nothing different from what I normally do with it), and I've also been super swamped with schoolwork. Lucky for me, the schoolwork is easing up now and I officially have actual WiFi (not a mobile hotspot). Long story short, I'll be coming back on here a bit more often and I'll be posting some of my new fantasy novel that I've barely found time to work on. Still trying to figure out exactly how I want to start this one, though. LOL.
I've added a new item to my portfolio:
 Inyarel Open in new Window. (13+)
Rough draft of a new story Critiques greatly appreciated!


I'd love to hear everyone's critiques on the two scenes provided. The title is a work in progress since I only have three characters figured out and just the two scenes, but all views and opinions are greatly welcomed and appreciated!
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