Hi!!! i'm new here and I would love to get feedback on my short story. I really need to know how others view the end and my fried told me about this website! She said its full of other writers so, I figured this was the place to get honest feedback.
Hi, I am calling you Bloo... I have reviewed your first story. {item :2192857} and the story Idea was impressive. The beginnings of a great futuristic story in my opinion.
Welcome to writing.com. I hope others will give your story a look.
* Content and content ratings in this area are monitored solely by this member. Page owners have the ability to remove posts and/or block posters who do not follow the content rating or who post unwanted content. In addition, each member can block/ignore another member using the Block/Ignore Members" link on the Account
Options screen.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/notebook/lennon-bloo
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.08 seconds at 4:04pm on Nov 28, 2025 via server WEBX1.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
Welcome to writing.com. I hope others will give your story a look.
Keep writing.
Alexi