Added some things to my second book in the series. Also, I decided to either delete chapters or combine some and that's why the chapter numbers are weird right now. I will fix that as soon as I can. I also know that there are a lot of spelling errors and probably more in this book right now, I just don't have the time to edit it yet. As soon as I can, I'll edit this book and continue to add more to the story.
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Just did a fair amount of revision and editing on my book. There will be more revisions to come to make it longer and more eventful and emotional. Take a read and review in the best and most honest way you can. The harsher the critique the better.
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Revisions of the story has just been completed. I am going to do another read through to see if there are any edits I can make.
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Is this your book version? If I have time, I'll take a look. |
Smee, It takes place in the same world as my book, but it's not an actual part of my book. It's a separate short story. And thank you Scruffy. |
I've just edited and completed an item in my portfolio for a contest coming up. Please read and review, give me the best/worst critiques you can:
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I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
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I've just edited an item in my portfolio:
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Hello there! So, I saw that you just joined the League of Young Writers. Me too! So I decided to check out your profile/portfolio/bio thing and I happened to discover two fantastic things. 1)You are also 18. *high fives* and 2) You like Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children which means...+20 COOL. Allocate as you wish. Yes, now that I have infected your profile with my little bit of not-that-random...ness, I shall away! |