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I'm sorry to have to write it, but I'm typing it anyway, with slightly watery eyes, trembling hands, but the certainty that it's the right thing to do: goodbye.

It's not forever. I love the community on WdC, and it has changed my writing forever.

I'd especially like to thank Schnujo's NOT Doing NaNoWriMo Author Icon for the kind comments and welcome on WdC. Also, I definitely owe Merremy Christmas! Author Icon so much for their helpfulness, knowledge and the big amount of patient reviews. I can hardly put it into words (but I can exaggerate a little!). A big thanks to Nobody’s Home Author Icon, to. A gigantic thank you also to my fans and the loyal readers of my blog, as well as to A E Willcox Author Icon who started the Flights of Fantasy group who’s IS REALLY THE BEST GROUP ON WdC!

I will be back, I promise. Maybe in a few weeks, when the longing takes me or my life becomes less stressful and circumstances change. Maybe next year, maybe in two or three.

Stay as great as you are!

Jeremy made this signature for me.
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My cat walked into my patio door on December 29, 2022. That is the same day that you signed up here.

On some days, he would like us to let him back outside. We tried that after his previous person said he was an outside cat. The truth is that he doesn't know how to use the outside world. He needs a home with humans to love him.

Are you sure the outside world will take good care of you?
I misunderstood you, Annette. I thought you meant like he smashed his face into the door. You mean he walked through it. *Laugh* I was wondering how you remembered the exact date he hit his face and was wondering if it caused a giant, memorable vet bill you didn't mention. *Rolling*
Always take care of yourself first because through you multiple worlds full of characters live *Heart*. But don’t forget, Evie, that this world exists with people that also care and love you, too! *Smile*
Want to know how to write better dialogue and make it sound real? Then read this article: "Write BETTER DIALOGUE (6 tips & how to make it realistic)" Open in new Window.

Want to know what happens at Camp NaNoWriMo, why you should sign up, why I won't be active in July, and a list of blog posts to get you through July? Then read this article: "What's happening in July?" Open in new Window.

Have a great July everyone!

Jeremy made this signature for me.
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OMG, where did June go?!

Have fun withh Camp NaNo *Smile*
The morning begins. But everything is different than expected...
 
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Someone wakes up after being asleep for 20 years (385 words)
Book Review "Conceal, Don't Feel: A Twisted Tale"


If you haven't joined Rach's Reading Club yet, I urge you to do so. It's not too late!

I've been reading "Conceal, Don't Feel: A Twisted Tale" by Jen Calonita, a fantasy novel about what would have happened if the two protagonists of the two-part Frozen film series had never met.

I bought it for a friend's eight-year-old daughter. As a writer, I could not escape the spell of the interesting book idea and read it.

The book has 320 pages and is rated 4.6 stars on Amazon. The book was published on 1 October 2019. The series is a New York Times bestseller.

The characters in this story are fictional. The book is based on the Disney film "Frozen".

The book is mainly about Anna and Else, who live in Arendell. We see them trying to find each other. We see them struggling to come to terms with the plot as they remember what happened a long time ago. And in the end we see how it all works out. Reindeer, first love, deception, ice castles and certain phrases from the film also appear in the book.

I especially like the idea of changing a fairy tale. It is entertaining to read.

There is one very crucial flaw in this novel. (I don't know if this is due to the translation into German).
It contains a lot of "tell", including frequent phrases like "she heard/felt/thought". I found two tense errors.

For these reasons, I would give the book 3.5 stars. The plot is good, but details and scenes need a lot of work.

If you know someone who is eight to twelve years old, likes books about other worlds, magic spells, winter in the middle of summer, and a separated sister, enjoys fantasy, and likes Disney movies or books with already familiar characters, I can recommend this book.
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Did you think of submitting your book reviews to "Angel Product Reviews" Open in new Window. [ASR] and earning MBs?
My heart is grinning, Evie 🏳️‍🌈 write&blog! *Delight*
Are you interested in the Enneagram or did you like my blog article "How to use the Enneagram to write conflicted characters" Open in new Window.?

Here are my experiences as a female Enneagram Eight:

 
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Experiences as a Female Enneagram Eight Open in new Window. (13+)
A personal essay about stereotypes and personality types in our society
Feel like reading some 40-word stories?
 
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A 40-word-story

 
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Promise Open in new Window. (13+)
A flash fiction in under 40 words

A girl. Birds. Memory. And dead bodies…
 
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Night Shift at the Morgue Open in new Window. (13+)
A girl. Birds. Memory. And dead bodies... (409 words)
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You had me at dead bodies 🤣☠️
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I think it is very time consuming, but still fun. If any of you have a little patience to spare, it would be a good idea to participate!
The ultimative template for CHARACTER VOICES!

You'll find a table, lots of tips and some examples to bring your characters' dialogue to life.

Just follow this link (click)  Open in new Window. and press "File", then "Make a Copy".

Have fun!
Evie
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Another world. A different environment. Another civilisation.
And in the middle of it all, a little girl.

 
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A girl comes into contact with another world and another civilisation for the first time.
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