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Zuk and Zobb - A Fable For Our Time Open in new Window. (E)
from the dawn of time - how fur became a fashion statement. Soon a Radio Play script
added a better first line to set the scene
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Adventures In Haiku - Open in new Window. (E)
This essay developed from my introduction for a breakout session at a writers' conference.
a basic rewrite after several critiques.
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... half an hour before the birthday guests were to arrive, disaster struck ...
by adding Mister T's hairstyle.
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with more info on the esoteric cave artist.
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Polka Dots and Sunshine Teardrops Open in new Window. (13+)
a child with a disability, a mouse in polka dots, and the kindness of strangers
and corrected some of the spacing errors
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The Firelight Honor Open in new Window. (E)
... the crowd murmured as firelight flashed on his knife blade ...
I believe this would be a good essay to share with others on this upcoming Presidents Day
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In this sentence, should the title or his name appear first, like so = = By 8:20, Jonas Millikin, the newly appointed American Ambassador =
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The sentence is fine, because the "newly appointed" is not part of the formal title, but a descriptor. No issues there!
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(as the conference room paragraphs seemed stilted and sterile, I added Estonian pastry and coffee to the conference room)
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More paragraphing to make for easier reading
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Kindest Regards, Lilli
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