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"If I had known...I would not have consented. I would have kept some of humanities secrets to myself...I know a strong soul is allotted a second chance...but whats more than that, I do not yet know...has the last soft petal slipped from the flower? And if so what is left? And even so, if there is Heaven and Hell, shall I be taken to the pit...for stripping the flower of some petals?"

Hey guys, I need some feed back on a portion of a chapter I'm working on. It's called chapter one, un revised, un finished. Help me out eh? Thanks!
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Looking for feedback on my writing. Any takers? :)
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