Thank you for taking the time to write a review of Greg's Story, and also for your frank, if somewhat unflattering view with regards to my ability to punctuate properly. Your observation was correct about the piece being full of mistakes, although I will take exception to how and when I start a new paragraph. Mostly. But again you are right on that as as well. And with regards to the helpfulness of glowing reviews that tell you how wonderful the story is but don't mean anything. Although it is nice to hear that people do like what you write. With all this in mind I dug out a copy of basic punctuation and re-wrote Greg's Story. Hopefully doing better this time. I do want to thank you for taking the time and effort to try and teach me, even if just a little. Aurthor. |
Many thanks to the wonderful people who reviewed and suggested edits to:
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It's light saying I want to be a writer and never picking up a pen.
Here is a prompt:
I am joking Aurthor but if you want to change direction in your life then grab your imagination and let it flood the pages.
You might even surprise yourself.
I wrote a few.
Sold a romance short and have a romance novella out there with a publisher who has asked for the full m/s (doesn't guarantee publication, of course, but it is a huge step).
So I say: