COMING SOON!!!!!!!!! DECEMBER 2014!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TO AMAZON, KINDLE, AND NOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DESTROYED BY AIMEE SHAYE Like: www.facebook.com/aimeeshaye08 for more details and reveals! Jade is a 10,000 year old vampire whose life was shattered because of a curse by the Fates and a brother who took their words seriously. In a blink of an eye the lives of his friends and family were jeopardized and ruined. His brother, and twin, Corbin, took away the only girl that Jade ever loved, his fiancée Eliza. After her death, Jade wanted nothing to do with humans; all he wanted was revenge. Avery is a simplistic girl from Pennsylvania who moves to New York to get away from her ex-boyfriend, a rogue vampire who wanted to change her in order to join Hades' army. When Jade has a vision of her dying in the hands of his brother, he has only two choices: save Avery or let her turn rogue and ruin the world forever. Will he save her or will he destroy the world? |
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