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Review of Wildling Girl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
"Wildling Girl" is a little tale that tells us of someone who is "...slowly slipping away" from the memory of someone who cares... Quite an interesting tale...


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Review of Honor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I agree with the writer of "Honor": in order to really honor a soldier, a sailor, an airman or a guard or for that matter, anyone who takes up a "sacred pact" to care for others, is to "act by taking care of those who guard us." It is indeed a "sacred pact" for each and every one of us to do as we memorialize the many who died...To Sacred Moon, thanks for your words...


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Rated: E | (4.0)
I would like to add my own praise of "King Charles The Third", who was recently declared the new King in England as his mother, Queen Elizabeth 11, passed away at the age of 96. May, King Charles The Third, follow and be guided by his mother's genuine love for all peoples in the world.

God bless the King!!!!


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Review of Evie  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
"Evie" is an interesting tale of a cat: how she was first found in a parking garage with injuries; how the cat's founders cared for it; and finally how the kitten was finally found a home with children who love her.

In fact, I would say this cat story confirms to us the love and care two humans gave to an animal. This reminds me how quite a number of people in my neighborhood who have pets, care for them, and feed them as part of their daily lives. This story indeed tells us that humans and animals do exist for each other...


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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
"A Caregiver Needs Help" is a sad tale of someone's loved one suffering from the dreaded disease, 'Alzheimer'. If only there is a way to stop Alzheimer from attacking the brain of a human, I would definitely recommend it, especially to people whose loved ones have succumbed to the disease. It is such a heart-breaking feeling to see/experience one's loved one in such a situation, that sometimes we wonder why there is such a disease...Our world has found many ways to rid us of some dieseases; and yet, Alzheimer continues to rip the minds of elderly people...

Take heart, author, because maybe one day a super-duper minded individual will stand among us and hail Alzheimer is completely GONE, CURED WITH SOMETHING LIKE AN ORANGE... Do you believe that day will come?????


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Review of Glass Butterflys  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
As I reviewed "Glass Butterflys", I realized that the "Prologue" is probably the beginning of a larger story that the writer plans to extend. It is a good beginning, interesting, and a tale that may be extended into a novel, maybe????? My only question is: should "Butterflys" be spelled "Butterflies"???


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Review of Juniper Tree 1  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The author of "Juniper Tree 1" brings to the reviewer a sense of "infinite peace"; a "satisfying sense of completeness and delight", even in the midst of terror... I find this piece of work a joy to read; a work of art that shows feelings and emotions that one can possess...

To the writer, let us see/read/review more of your work...


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Review of Blank  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
"Blank" by Ghostie reminded me so much when lots and lots and lots of ideas and thoughts ran endlessly through my brain; ignored them; or rather told myself I shall write them "tomorrow". However, my "tomorrow" never came.

As writers, we tend to tell ourselves to remember what those ideas and thoughts are without writing them down. Then when tomorrow does come, we realize there is such a thing called "flashes of thoughts and ideas" that tend to leave us completely "blank" as well as the realization of how fickle our memory has become...

To the author, your story may remind other writers of their "tomorrows"...


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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Another interesting read was "Questions from Charlie". We realize there are ideas and thoughts that spring out of our everyday life; and we read and be amazed at how some writers do really make it more clear how to write... Kudos to the writer of this piece!!!!



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Review of "The Best Gift"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
AS I reviewed the story, "The Best Gift", I was awed at how the death of one human becomes the life of another. I felt the agony of a man who lost a wife; however, the beauty of the tale becomes known when the man who lost his wife realizes that his loss became the very reason for the happiness that made his life complete. It is a good story, and I would like to congratulate the writer for his piece of work; and that I hope he will continue to grace Writing.Com with more lovely and pleasing works...


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Congratulations to the writer of "How I became an English learner". She/he has learned the use of the English language!!! Hurrah!!! We need writers who will write and share with all writers in the world how satisfying it is to share... Let's hope the writer will continue to write more, not only about English but also about all sorts of ideas and thoughts...


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Review of An Unusual Dance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Good for the writer of "Unusual Dance" to share his poetry. We do need to "spice" our writing with laughter... Thanks for sharing your thoughts....



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Review of Stand aside  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
To the writer of "Stand Aside", thank you for such lovely assurances for those of us who are over-active, over-anxious, over-misguided... We need words that make us stop, think, realize that we are in need of a solution to our emotional vulnerabilities... and thanks to this writer for reminding us that we are not "alone"...

To the writer, thank you for such encouragement...


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Review of Destiny  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This flash, "Destiny", is a fine read because it shows a good relationship between father and son. When we look at this generation, we see many sons and daughters who want to be independent. They crave to want to do what they want; and since they know what they are doing, it is therefore a parent's duty is go along with what the children want...

A good read, Jacky; do let us read more of what you are writing...


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Isn't it fun to have children? This is the idea I got reviewing, "What's Mine Is Mine". Parents do provide for their children, and take pride in treating them equally; and yet as portrayed in this little tale, the decision of children to do what they want to do... One just have to laugh... It was good of the writer to show us how parents made things possible for their children; and how surprising it was to realize their children do have other ideas...


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Review of Gaining story  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Is it wrong for a father to want to see his son gain weight? Absolutely, not. However... no I think I would leave it to the father to think that the encouragement he gave his son to eat more, and thereby, gain weight, is a good thing. I wonder if a father would stop for a tiny moment and realize that becoming "overweight" may mean a few problems for the son?????

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Thanks to the writer of "How To Embrace Your House Ghost", I am now assured I can "embrace" my house ghost. Yes, I, too, have a house ghost...although mine just comes and goes, and vanishes the moment I look at (should I say her or him)??? I do believe I have not heard bells ringing as yet...

Write on...


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Review of Fuel for The Fire  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I found this poem, "Fuel for the Fire" intriguing... It is a human story, a human tragedy, a human way to "softly murmured", "Some more fuel for the fire..." Was there forgiveness after all????

A good read, indeed...


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Review of Living With RA  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Reading "Living with RA" made me feel uneasy because this tale tells of a writer who seems to enjoy the "pains" of RA, which also gave the author the "strength" to write... I think it is wonderful when writers find a way to express their writing so that others would realize, too, that there is a way to write inspite of bodily pain... I salute this writer... may she/he continue to show readers/reviewers the way to "good write"...


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Rated: E | (3.5)
The mystery of the "Teaser: The Murphy brothers' curse" took me in: I just love mysteries. Nevertheless, this tale of the two brothers, their "bad luck" and the curiosity of one brother's wife leaving as well as the other brother's girl disappearing seem the start of a mystery... and the mystery remains to be solved or will it be solved???? I salute the writer for creating such a mysterious tale ...


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Review of Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Frankly, "Time" seems to tell that there is change when one is caught in a time of "unchanged, unhindered" "inevitable cycle"... and we should therefore "seek, the clearer it becomes" "as nothing remains as it is." It is indeed a good thought...



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Review of White Tiles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
When the writer created "White Tiles", the intention most probably was to "show" the feelings that one experiences in times of aloneness or when the writer "shows" the many different ways when senses control the human brain, and results in the many ways we write... I believe the writer knows how to write...


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Rated: E | (4.0)
The writer's tale, The Wonder of A Smile, reminded me when I first took my grandson to kindergarten. Although, no other child approached my grandson when he started to cry, I looked around and realized that all the other children were in tears as well, bawling the place down!!! I also noted that the mother "wasn't ready"... Sharing this experience is something writers do emphasize: the feeling of love; the sense of parting that both child and parent feel; the smile that tells of a love that exists between mother and child... To the author, here's hoping we shall read more of your work... Good wishes,

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Review of Man Of The World  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Wow, and wow some more!!! To the writer of "Man of the World", I salute you for this piece of work: a revelation of two people's attitude toward trees... I agree with you, this couple is definitely a "Man of the World".

All good wishes,


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Review of My Search  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To the writer of "My Search", I thank you for the clarification regarding "Krishna, Zoroaster, Buddha, Moses, Mohammad, the The Bab"!!! I do agree (and I quote you), "The differences in each relition arose from the different capacities of humanity in the ages in which they were revealed." Such a simple explanation; and the truth sets you free...

Let us hope that others have had the chance to read your piece; and that they, too, would believe the "differences".

All good wishes as you continue to write more...


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