This is a somber piece of work. You were talking about a knife. Slicing through life as it were. There are questions at the end of the piece that made it come home to me. You did well in presentingthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did For there were no errors on the page. Keep writing. .
Whle this seems like a bunch of words to some it iwas a beautiful piece of work. There were pictures to be seen wihitn the piece. You used your colors well. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Your work was well done. You did a good job. Keep writing.
This is a great piece of work. You put so much of yourself in this piece it shows so well. You did ti well as far as the work being well done. You did well in prsenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors in the page. Keep writing.
All well and clear is this piece. You have pictures here that are worth the seeing. You used the right colors to paint your pictures. ONe of them is the love you have the for young man and yet you are afraid of being hurt. You have done well in presneting this piece of literature for the purpose of reviewing. You did a good job and it shows how well you did with the errors being none at all. You did well in that you had no errors is what I am trying to say. Keep writing.
This is somewhat somber ni the tone of it. However,it was done well. It was a short piece but had pictures to be seen through the colors you used so well. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no erors found in the piece. Keep writing.
This was a piece that was rather long for a poem but it was a good one. I can't say that I envy you on your fun as you had it witth the rain but it was something enjoyable to read You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it was a hearty piece. Keep writing.
Again it is a good piece and one I am glad that I clicked. But there is more to come fromthis piece. You have noted it in the act 4 of nothing yet but there will be something to come from it . I hope that you will keeep wrting this piece. Itis a good one. You have done well in presenting this piece of literatuere for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows howwell you did. Keep writing.
This is a great piece of work. Your painting was done well. The colors you used in this piece was just the right ones. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors in the page. You hopefully will keep on writing. You 're good at it.
What a piece of work this is! You have had my attention to this story. It is as if you were in adream state and was hoping against hope that the person you love is near you. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job. your work is don well. Keep writing.
This is a somber piece of work. It is hellish in the words that you used. it was a piece that I am glad that I clicked. You made everything seem so vivid. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job at getting my attention for yo udid that from the beginnng to the end. Keep writing.
What an interesting concept is this! I never thought of it before and find it hard to believe now. But you are the expert soto speak and i will not discount you. You sure made a beliver out of me with thiis piece. Youdid well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did agood job. It ws well done and there were no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
You are a certain delimma of what you feel is important and what isn't. You wish to be better inthe way you look You wish to be a better person on the inside out. You know your limitiations and they are the thnigs that are holding youback. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a reivew. You did a good job and it shows how wellyou did for there are no errors in the page. keep writing.
This is a short but good piece of work. You did it well with pictures one was able to see with the pet member and it was a good one. You did well in pesenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how wellyou did for there are no errors found in the page. Keep writing.
This was a good piece of work. You did everything well. There were pictures to be seen throughout the piece. It was a good choice of colors that made it so. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no erorrs found in the piece. Keep writing.
It must be tranquail for you thento be able to sleep at night withou the noises that youhave heard before. You have done well in presenting this piece of lterature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors in the piece. You have a got a good piecehere and should be proud of it. Keep writing.
You had me goion there for a time. It was spooky at the very least to say and it was done well. You made it seem that there was someone outside banging on the door. When it essence it is was from the inside of the house. you really got me up with that. The football game had to go and you were going to find out what was going on on the outside. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job nd it shows how well you did. No errors on the page. Good going. Keep writing.
This was a somber piece of reading. It made me think of the ones I have just lost in the recent days of life. My cousin for one and the loss of my parents in another instance. you painted a somber picture here with the colors you used well. It was a piece that I will remember for sometime to come. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it was well done. Keep writing.
This was a good read. It was somewhat hard to read though. It is as if the thoughts of the person in the piece was that of a woman and that she would be smiling tomorrow. and not today. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job. Keep writing.
I don't see where you would say that of being the woman you were meant to be as being simply too much. There were pictures to be seen here with the colors of your words and it iwas a great one about yourself. You did well in presenting this piec of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it was well done. Keep writing.
This is a good piece of work. You did well in presesnting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it was well done. There were picturesot be seen here with the colors you used to paint the picture. It was a good one. Keep witiing.
It seemed that the man was after you and he was going to get you for something. I didn't know right up until the end of the pieice that he was talking about the woman. This was news to my ears and eyes,. You did well in presenting t his piece of literature for he purpose of a review. you did a good job and unlike this review it didnt' have any errors in it. I am sorry for shoddy typing but I cant' help myself these days. Please excuse me. You are asked to keep on writing.
Good story line is this one. Makes you think of what would have happened had you persued it anymore of asking her anything. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was done well. It is hoped that you wll keep onwriting. You're good at it.
This was a sad story but one that I believed. It isn't hard to get me to believe anything but unusual. you ddi well in prsenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a rev iew You did a good job. It is without any errors and it iwas well done. Keep writing.
This is rather long but it is good. You added pictures to the piece. With your colors you used well, it was a great picture to see. There were no errors on the page. So, you did this well and in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review youdid a good job. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL! this wss a beautiful piece of work. You used your colors well in doing this piece. We all have hopes and dreams that we will attain something or that we will refrain from something out there. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors on the page. Keep writing.
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