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ASIN: B0C2VYV9KD
ID #115196
The Bad Weather Friend   (Rated: 13+)
Product Type: Kindle Store
Reviewer: Jeff Author Icon
Review Rated: 13+
Amazon's Price: $ 9.99
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I've only read a couple of Dean Koontz books before and I'm honestly having a hard time deciding whether he's a genius, or crazy. He's always kind of struck me as cheap imitation of Stephen King, where he has great story concepts but his characters and dialogue aren't as good as King's. His prose itself is also really fascinating; he goes on these wild tangents that either totally work, or fall completely flat. For example, early in the book, there's this great moment introducing a character:


The enforcer was so incensed by his error that he wanted to pistol-whip and execute someone working at Surfside - he didn't care whom - to reassure himself that he wasn't losing his edge. He chose Tina Finestra, the firm's number two agent, who weighed one hundred and ten pounds. This was his second mistake. Tina had twelve years of martial arts training. And attitude. She was determined that no thug from El Salvador would prevent her from conducting a series of showings she had scheduled for a client who was qualified to buy a house in the thirty-million-dollar range. She smashed Santiago's nose, took his gun, breaking two of his fingers in the process, and drove him headfirst into a wall. He fell to the floor, stunned, flat on his back, and Tina dropped on him, using the gun butt to hammer his crotch repeatedly until he passed out. Tina was on time for her first appointment with her clients, and when the police revived the unconscious Santiago, he cried like the child that he was now unlikely to ever father.


I mean, that's an objectively awesome character intro. But it's also kind of crazy in its manic energy, and Koontz employs this approach throughout the book, regardless of whether it's appropriate to the pace of the scene or not. It really worked in the above excerpt because he's describing a gangbanger getting his butt handed to him by a real estate agent. It's an active, exciting scene and the description pacing makes it awesome. It's less awesome when Koontz uses it liberally to describe office decor, or a character staring out the window, or the character's backstory.

He sets a lot of his stories, including this one, in Orange County, California (where I live), so it is fun to read his descriptions and inclusion of places that are familiar to me. Ultimately, Dean Koontz is in the same category as Stephen King for me... I've been disappointed as often as I've been thrilled by his work, so I'm a little more discerning about which titles I read. I usually have to really love the premise and/or have it highly recommended by someone whose opinion I trust.
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