Lori Peters is doing what all good sisters, mothers, and daughters do - being there for the people who need her, yet never letting anyone know that her own world is crumbling . . . and fast. But when the tempest pot of secrets explodes, so that even moments that should be joyful are poisoned by fear, Lori is in a fight for her life.

If you like suspense, and believe that real strength is in character not braun, you'll enjoy this book.

The story was interesting and the author is someone you may have seen around the message forums.

The editing that was done on the book wasn't up to par. The errors in it could have been avoided had the editor taken more time in the pre-printing phase.

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Has persevered through much in her life, and in spite of the difficulties she faces, she never gives up. This book is proof of that strong spirit.

The story will carry you through - you just have to find out how it ends.

While I enjoyed the story itself, and highly respect the author, I was disappointed in the quality of editing that was done. I was surprised that the editor didn't recommend slightly more character development, or do some basic copyediting. These oversights were distracting at times, occasionally stalling the momentum, but the story itself was one that needed to be told. Bravo to Lady Stars for her first published book!

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