Greetings All! Well I certainly am to be considered a newbie here since my presence on Writing.Com is less than 30 days! As an ex- literacy teacher though I have ben writing minus the sharing for years upon years. If you go to my work in progress and read Chapter 1, well a great big thanks! I am trying to determine if Chapter 2 should use the fire alarm scenario, or the collision between the two anguished fifth graders. Maybe I should combine them into a variation of the third chapter, If you liked chapter one and feel motivated to read onward, all I can say is Thanks!